| "Kindergartners" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: goth _c On: January 10, 2005 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved your story its really cool how instead of him crashing to the ground when kagome says sit he just laughs his head off i think you should defenetly write more chapters!!:p
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Reviewed By: lone-puppy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 05:17 CST
Comment/Review:
that was soo funny. sit hahahahha sit ahahaha cool! i like how he laughs instead of falls. because falling would be like abuse and abuse is bad.
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