| "What Revenge Brings" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ] |
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 12:06 CST
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bad cliffie! you must update!
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 12:06 CST
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bad cliffie! you must update!
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 10:42 CST
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Sorry, I can't help you with the color of Sephiroth's eyes. I'm not familiar with his character unfortunately. Another excellent chapter, I'm interested in how the generals are going to interact with each other and the spirit detectives once they all come together. I'm also curious as to if Kagome knows of her fathers tendency to spy and if not, how she is going to react when she finds out. The amount of detail was once again perfect, I look forward to future chapters. This has definitely captivated my attention. Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Zip On: February 19, 2005 02:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whooohoooo!!! cha cha cha! marvelous! finally, something original!! argh! i have read way to many fanfics that deal with the same exact thing!!! oh, how i worship you now!! ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ refreshing,new,very good grammar,leaves me on the edge of my seat, what else could want?....Nothing! ah, thankyou for the wonderful story. I hope you contiune and keep up the great work!!! P.S. I vote for the Kagome/Sesshomaru paring!Thanx!!
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Reviewed By: Harem Fan On: February 16, 2005 03:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is awesome! I totally vote for the harem/Kagome idea. If you'll allow it, I vote 5 times for that idea. If you're doing the harem idea, I have a suggestion on who should be in it. The harem should consist of: Kurama, Hiei, Koenma, Touya, Jin, Karasu, Kuronue, Suzaku, Sesshoumaru, Kageromaru, Juuromaru, Sephiroth, Cloud, Riku, Conri, Sirus and Naraku(if you like those light and dark attract stories.) I know you have the ability to do it, just that you are unsure how to proceed. If you want to, you can type down anything you have problems with and I can try to help you with them in my reviews for your story. I have alot of faith in you, Good Luck!
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Title: Hiei Kagome
Reviewed By: kagome_hiei_luvers On: February 15, 2005 20:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiei/kagome it has to be!!!!!! their attitudes(neva can spell that damn word) match. it would be awsome!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 09:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another Great Chapter! I still vote for Harem. And if you do, how about every so often, Kagome visits one of the guys then, as she makes her round, or something like that ^___^;; I hope to see more chapters. Keep up the great writing ^___^
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 23:28 CST
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Wonderful story, I love the amount of detail that you go into with your chapters. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more of this story. As for pairings I kinda like the harem idea myself lol But if I had to go with strictly one guy I'm a big fan of Kag/Kur. Whatever you choose though I am certain will be great. Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! When I read the first chapter, I was a little wary, but now all I can say is DAMN! I've got to vote for Kagome/Everyone. Instead of her just having one lover, why not everyone. That way, she can taste what she wants, when she wants. Please continue and I'll continue reading ^___^
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: katiepatie (not logged in) On: February 06, 2005 17:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great so far....i like how dark chappie 5 is...it fits with the story...2 thumbs up!
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Reviewed By: Acheron SlvrFyre On: February 06, 2005 13:04 CST
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I love your fic. Were you influenced by Laurell K. Hamilton's "Merry Gentry Series" and Anne Bishop's "Black Jewel Trilogy"? For some reason your descrpitions of Kagome and her brothers just screamed Daemon Sadi from BJT, and the descriptions of Conri sounded like Doyle from Merry Gentry, my favorite characters! *grins* Anyway, I hope you update soon. My vote for the pairings would be Kagome/Everyone (Harem) which will become Kagome/Sesshoumaru because they fall in love.
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Reviewed By: Roses_Petal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry didn't vote and had a spelling mistake I meant to write love instead of live! Please answer my question!
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Reviewed By: Roses_Petal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 23:17 CST
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Ohhh.... Sephiroth(don't think I spelled his name right) is falling in live with Kagome. Who is Kagome paired with? Update soon!
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: kagome_hiei_luvers On: January 16, 2005 15:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!and if u dont mind me saying i think this should be a kagome/hiei fic k.... g2g bye
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 07:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon!!!!!! its a great story update soon ^_^
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