| "Unexpected happenings" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: lilxneko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 06:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
your story is good but i think readers want a character they know instead of a made up one. i know thats how i want it cuz i'm not going continue reading this. nothing aginst you cuz this is your story and you make it anyway you want it to be.
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Reviewed By: SacredArrow89(not logged in) On: January 26, 2005 17:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. this story is really good. I can't believe that this all happened. i am still shocked from reading it. lol. anyways, i can't wait to find out what sesshoumaru will do, but i have a feeling he is the one who is visting her in her dreams or whatever. anyways, can't wait for more! Later.
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Reviewed By: SacredArrow89 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it. I thought that it was really awesome and so far i can't wait until the next chapter. I am wondering though how she got pregant without having sex but my question hopefully will be answered in later chapters. Anyways, I'm excited to read more and I think this story is going to turn out to be a real thriller or whatever. Not liking her parents much. I think that disowning ones child is inhuman and should literly die for doing such a thing. Well again can't wait for more. Later.
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