| "The Monster" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: rockyroad On: December 20, 2009 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
u too quick to the punch nd there's not enough description of wats happening or wat the scene luks like nd its making harder for me to understand wats happening! sooo if u could make it easier to read by descibing things and scene changes better that would be *great*!!!
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: Chikyo-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 15:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why did you stoped here? You should go on, and update more chapters, because I like this story very much!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 13:22 CST
Comment/Review:
its a very interesting story!!! please update!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 17:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm, interesting, that's all i'll say for now. Write more chapters, and i'll give a bigger review, for now, let's just say i'm interested in this. Though, you should fix the title, it says "Moster" and i presume it is safe to say that you intended it to read "Monster"? Besides that, good work.
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Title: The Moster
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 18:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: THATS AWSOME
Reviewed By: Umi7 Inu's lil' gurl On: March 22, 2005 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I saw maybe a few misshaptes. but it was awsome plz update.!!!!!!(^-^) PLZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! cool story; i love it! please write some more chappies! i can't wait! ^^
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