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| "these fatal moments of your nearness" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only watched a few episodes of FMA, and never really got into the series, but a friend of mine introduced me to EdxAl and after reading your fic, I am hooked! I love it and will search for more EdxAl fics. Keep up the wonderful work ^__^
| Title: Ooooh
Reviewed By: RubyGloom [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.... I just wanna say I'm a huge Elricest fan. Almost as big a fan as I am EdWin. This was excellent, Ed and Al definetly deserve each other. YAY
| Reviewed By: Harmonie Des Anges [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 02:14 CDT
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Oh dear, I do believe I have found an author out there who has willingly indulging in an AWESOME brother slash fic. YES!!!!!!! The slash is strong in this one, to quote my sister and we both love it. Yeah, they're brothers, yes, it's incest, and further it's GAY incest, but if your going to do something wrong, do it wrong right. Besides, I DARE any asshole to come up and say that it's wrong after the hellish life that they've lived. They need eachother and I could NEVER see them seperating willingly. Edward will give anything to get his brother's body back and I really want to see what Alphonse will look like when he does get his body back. I know that's not the point of this fic and it's just a little ficlet about an indelible sin, which brings me to my next statement. When watching FMA, does anyone else kind of feel that the first closing "Indelible Sin" isn't really discusing the fact that they tried a human transmutation? I don't know, maybe it's just me, but I keep getting this really awesone sense of double entendre. Hee hee hee, maybe I'm just a pervert. Oh, well, I really liked the fic.
| Reviewed By: melody [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh.....My. God. *spazzes* That was the most amazing thing ever!!! The best Ed/Al I've ever read...heck, the best FMA fic I've ever read!!! ^___^ ..................oh......wait a minute.........gah!!! Great, now I'm an Elric brothers incest fan!!! *smacks herself* I can't believe it!!! Damn you for writing such a great fic!!! ^___~ LOL, I absolutely loved this -- a very interesting characterization of the both of them......it made it very....realistic, should I say? Yeah, for lack of a better word, I guess...... ^^ Keep up the good work!!!
| Reviewed By: R's On: April 18, 2005 14:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ugggh. I have morals! But...this was hot. * bashes head into wall* I HAVE MORALS! Believe me. But -hot damn-! I can't decide whether or not this pairing is too naughty for me. Wee. I guess time and a slow erosion of my morals will bring a decision about. Yeah. That sounds right. By the way, that was an awesome one-shot. Angsting!Ed is very...sad. I liked it.
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