| "Broken people" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 11:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Poor Kagome to loose her family. Please continue this story ^___^
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 01:19 CST
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Still very, very sweet. To find love in a graveyard...that's gotta be new! LOL --- "To gain...one must first lose."
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 00:32 CST
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I'm a little confused. In the first chapter, Sango is Inuyasha's friend and he tells Kagome she can stay with Sango. In the second chapter, you wrote that Sango was Kagome's friend and that Kagome had already been staying with her. The chapters contradict each other several times. I'm not flaming you, I am just pointing out some confusing points in your story. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 00:57 CST
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Aww...still cute...and so sad. Poor girl, with her family gone, her heart wants something to cling to, something to reaffirm that she's alive. Stopping her was the right thing to do. Hurried and desparate would have made the act dirty instead of the beautiful thing it should be. ---Nicely done.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 11:33 CST
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How sad, and how cute. This was well writen and you should continue. (I love it when something makes InuYasha blush...it shows how innocent he is)
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
urgh this is great! I love this story and especially how you start it out! update!
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Reviewed By: shrine^maiden On: January 12, 2005 06:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE!~!! YOU'VE GOT A TOTALLY AWESOME START! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE OTHER CHAPPIES!!!
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Reviewed By: IdiotGirl22 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 18:31 CST
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You did a great job! I really like this story and hope you update soon!
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