| "If you only knew." Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Yoko Oro [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 10:05 CST
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I like your rhyme scheme...man, what a lame review this turned out to be...
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Reviewed By: the sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 22:16 CST
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she hurt him, intentionally or not, and pretends like nothing happened, and he seems to be torn between love and hate... he seems to try to pretend like nothing is wrong, but really, everything is... very sad...
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Reviewed By: Stephanie - Louise On: January 21, 2005 18:29 CST
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Good work :) Keep it up ^^
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Reviewed By: RayGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 12:25 CST
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I really like it. To be perfectly honest though it sounds lie he is going crazy at the end! I really love this poem and hope to read more of yuors1
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Reviewed By: Call Me Kim [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 13:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that is was a really good poem! A little short but I really liked it. =)
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Title: that's good
Reviewed By: yamialex17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 13:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's a neat little Poem really i liked it alot and it gave me something to think about. you should be pround of your self. bye yamialex17.
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