| "Edward Learns a Lesson" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Oni Jones On: July 28, 2003 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God, handel it your self space cowboy was awesome. that sent the story over the edge. |
Reviewed By: vegetaslady12 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, that was really great, but i think you should have kept ed 13, because you shouldnt be afraid to write, Iv read worse, baleeeeeeiv me! Bur it was awesome! IM so glad it wasent a spike/faye, i hate those pairings, they are so overused, but this is one of my fav pairings ed and spike, good job! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: I admit... On: June 11, 2003 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I admit I'm perverted and that shit but the last part. ~handle it yourself cowboy~ made me bust out in laughter. Good job! |
Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 19:46 CST
Comment/Review:
that was fun and original and well written. I enjoyed how you ended the story best. |
Reviewed By: Feylance On: February 21, 2003 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've always wondered what would happen between an older Ed and Spike, this was cute and lusty. Thanks for writing it! |
Reviewed By: Lain On: February 15, 2003 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked that... I didn't expect to, because I'm a yaoi fan... I'm just glad this wasn't a Spike/Faye fic.
It would be awesome if you wrote a Spike/Vicious fic! There aren't enough out there. |
Reviewed By: ann ime [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this was good.I love stories of Spike getting it on with anyone.Why does he have to give her a dose of "reality"?What's wrong with a "happy ass"?Keep up your writing...You are good . |
Reviewed By: The Last Face [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 02:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Handle It Yourself Space Cowboy"
You have no idea how fucking hilarious that is.
Oh, man, I think I broke something. |
Reviewed By: tom On: December 08, 2002 17:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
you stayed within michigan state law though i do except utaths with proof as for the story interesting |
Reviewed By: Gorlliazman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2002 15:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I..... I have notin to say about that but ur creative |
Reviewed By: radical ed's biggest fan On: September 09, 2002 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with princess. I am such a huge fan of edward and spike, so I love this fic to death. I only have two more words, write more! |
Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2002 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the story is great! I'm a big fan of Ed. I like here reaction to Spike's advances! By the way, Liqiud Raidan, Spike does not die at vicious's hand. Just recently, the cowboy bebop movie has been released in japan. It is said, once again, Spike has avoided death and again returns to the life of a bounty hunter! Ya gotta love spike for his stamina! *drool* |
Reviewed By: Princess of Pain On: July 15, 2002 11:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
OK. I'm going to give a 100% honest review, and I hope you don't take it as an insultling thing.
First of all, this needs some severe editing. You have a number of run-on sentences, and your grammar isn't the greatest in the world. MediaMiner has a section in the forums where you can search for and/or request a Beta reader, who will read over your fic and edit it for you. I would recommend you doing so.
Two--if you're going to write a fic with Spike and Ed, go all the way and do it when she is 13 years old. As one very rude reviewer already pointed out, it would be impossible for this fic to take place post-series, so if you're going to go with a unique pairing like Spike/Ed, you might as well make it shota-con. I don't like shota-con, but I like it even less when people change the age because don't have the balls to write it and they're afraid of what people will thing.
Third, for the reviewers begging the author for a Spike/Faye... if she wanted to write a Spike/Faye lemon, she would have done just that. But she wanted to write a Spike/Ed lemon, and if you didn't like that idea, then why the FUCK did you decide to read it? Further, why did you ignore her asking NOT to be spoiled on the end of the series, other than just plain meanness?
Anyhow, yes. Other than the fact that it needs some editing, it's not a bad go for a first hentai fic. Keep at it. ^^ |
Reviewed By: KiKi On: July 08, 2002 21:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was the first cowboy bebop lemon ive read and ot was an odd couple but i liked it keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: AngelWings On: July 11, 2002 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! That was a really interesting fic. I really like the part at the end when it say handle it yourself cowboy... Your fic was really creativity. |
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