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"Edward Learns a Lesson" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ]
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 Reviewed By: ann ime [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 28, 2003 14:50 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I thought this was good.I love stories of Spike getting it on with anyone.Why does he have to give her a dose of "reality"?What's wrong with a "happy ass"?Keep up your writing...You are good .
 Reviewed By: The Last Face [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 20, 2003 02:57 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
"Handle It Yourself Space Cowboy"
You have no idea how fucking hilarious that is.
Oh, man, I think I broke something.
 Reviewed By: tom  On: December 08, 2002 17:36 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
you stayed within michigan state law though i do except utaths with proof as for the story interesting
 Reviewed By: Gorlliazman [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 18, 2002 15:04 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I..... I have notin to say about that but ur creative
 Reviewed By: radical ed's biggest fan  On: September 09, 2002 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I agree with princess. I am such a huge fan of edward and spike, so I love this fic to death. I only have two more words, write more!
 Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 24, 2002 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think the story is great! I'm a big fan of Ed. I like here reaction to Spike's advances! By the way, Liqiud Raidan, Spike does not die at vicious's hand. Just recently, the cowboy bebop movie has been released in japan. It is said, once again, Spike has avoided death and again returns to the life of a bounty hunter! Ya gotta love spike for his stamina! *drool*
 Reviewed By: Princess of Pain  On: July 15, 2002 11:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
OK. I'm going to give a 100% honest review, and I hope you don't take it as an insultling thing.

First of all, this needs some severe editing. You have a number of run-on sentences, and your grammar isn't the greatest in the world. MediaMiner has a section in the forums where you can search for and/or request a Beta reader, who will read over your fic and edit it for you. I would recommend you doing so.

Two--if you're going to write a fic with Spike and Ed, go all the way and do it when she is 13 years old. As one very rude reviewer already pointed out, it would be impossible for this fic to take place post-series, so if you're going to go with a unique pairing like Spike/Ed, you might as well make it shota-con. I don't like shota-con, but I like it even less when people change the age because don't have the balls to write it and they're afraid of what people will thing.

Third, for the reviewers begging the author for a Spike/Faye... if she wanted to write a Spike/Faye lemon, she would have done just that. But she wanted to write a Spike/Ed lemon, and if you didn't like that idea, then why the FUCK did you decide to read it? Further, why did you ignore her asking NOT to be spoiled on the end of the series, other than just plain meanness?

Anyhow, yes. Other than the fact that it needs some editing, it's not a bad go for a first hentai fic. Keep at it. ^^
 Reviewed By: KiKi  On: July 08, 2002 21:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was the first cowboy bebop lemon ive read and ot was an odd couple but i liked it keep up the good work
 Reviewed By: AngelWings  On: July 11, 2002 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
WOW!!! That was a really interesting fic. I really like the part at the end when it say handle it yourself cowboy... Your fic was really creativity.
 Reviewed By: dragon88 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 30, 2002 14:11 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really liked that one. Being a Spike lover myself I would like to make a suggestion that you try other peeps like jet and faye or Vicious and Jullia, oh there's a thought...
 Reviewed By: Mistress_Sanada [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 24, 2002 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was well written and very interestingly done!
it's a very unlikely pair and very well kept with in the Bebop realm which was great and it would have made 4 a good ep hehe ;)
great work keep it up!
Mrs. Sanada
 Reviewed By: Cowgirl_Bebop  On: March 02, 2002 20:00 CST
Rating(s):
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Um, good details(unfortunately). It was ok, but i would prefer Faye and Spike, but, your choice. It was kinda scary, but okay. (Write a Spike and Faye one please!)
 Reviewed By: Liqiud Raidan  On: April 22, 2002 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It was surprisingly good by the way at the end of Cowboy Bebop Spike and Vicious kill each other
 Reviewed By: Just another fan  On: January 27, 2002 00:23 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really liked this fanfic, but I think it would be better if it was Spike & Faye not that Im saying Spike & Ed are wrong their great too. I would really like it if u made a Spike & Faye one but that's just your choice.
 Reviewed By: Darcy_Superstar  On: October 31, 2001 20:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Man, good work. I liked it. Write more with Spike and Ed. Please. They make a surprisingly cute couple. Keep up the good work.
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