| "I need and want you BOTH but......." Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Title: I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT!!!!!
Reviewed By: Kagome0102 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 21:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... this story is AWESOME! My God, this is the style that I love. you have that touch that I am like upsest with. OMG. I like fell in love the second I read this story. Im gonna make sure, that I come to this website everytime to read this. I think I might even want to print it out. just for reference. If you ahve them a little more violent and forceful, then again, they were really forceful already, I think that that might be good. Almost like a wolf hunting a rabbit. The rabbit so helpless, all taht he can do is run, hoping to lost the wolf when in his mind, he knows taht there is no escape... I LOVE THIS STORY!!! Kagome0102~
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 12:13 EDT
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You are serously pathetic, you know that? Your spelling is a tad better. If you take a month, you shall meet the evil shoe of doom. And it's not the kind of shoe that you luv so much. It will inflict pain on your head. so update. you took so long with this last chapter. And I don't care about all the stupid xtra credit reports that you do that just keeps you from updting. ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 17:00 EST
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I'm baaaaccckkk. update soon, um, hi. You can't spell!!!! It's horrible! ok bye
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Reviewed By: wlkby27 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 17:46 EST
Comment/Review:
awsome story update soon!
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Title: sorry
Reviewed By: Kurama or Hiei Both Great Boy Toys [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 18:25 EST
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have to check my reviews like this but keep on reviewing and im gratful to all my reviewer
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Reviewed By: Chelle On: January 25, 2005 13:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
All right, then. Grammar is not your forté, I assume. Neither is style. Or plot. Or originality. Or...writing. If I were you, which, thankfully, I am not, I would get help. A beta, or two, or several.
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Reviewed By: Black Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 12:05 EST
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god wrok cant wait till next chappy
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 12:02 EST
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Thank you for updating. maybe you should check on your hints as to what will happen. You're still writing 'you' instead of 'she' check it, and you missed a verb, it's still in present tense. YOU AND QUEEN ARE MEGA HENTAIS!!!!!! I know you have a tendancy to sometimes blurt things out, but now all the world can see how bad it gets. I'm glad I'm not as bad as you or 'queen', yet. Update soon or, well, let's just say I know where you sleep. ^_^ peace out until next update.
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Reviewed By: KristyKamae [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 17:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ericka: PPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLEEEAAAASSSSSEEEEEEE update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love your story so much! And beleive me I KNOW GOOD STORIES when I read them. And also I rarly ever read meadia miner and if I do its only the good ones and you are in my top ten!
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Reviewed By: Kristy Kamae and Erika On: January 19, 2005 17:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ericka: PPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLEEEAAAASSSSSEEEEEEE update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love your story so much! Kristy: And beleive me I KNOW GOOD STORIES when I read them. And also I rarly ever read meadia miner and if I do its only the good ones and you are in my top ten!
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: SesshomaruInuyashaKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 18:36 EST
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i love the story. i wondering if i could be in the story as a friend of the princess or relative?
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Reviewed By: K On: January 14, 2005 23:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Updaye soon, your story is really good.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 14:03 EST
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I think a new chapter is in order here, my offer still stands, I know how slow you type, but the update is interesting, need anymore ideas? i'm offering, you know where to reach me.
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Reviewed By: Black Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 13:07 EST
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love the update lets gooooooooooooooooo
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 20:15 EST
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You better hurry up and update. I KNOW WHERE YOU SLEEP!!! I found it at last!!. ^_^ as for the side convo, sad but true, and sometimes, I wish it wasn't. If I have to come over and type it for you, I will cuz you type slow. Please take all of this as constructive criticizm (sp) and not insults, you know how I am with complements.
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