| "I need and want you BOTH but......." Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: wlkby27 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 17:46 EST
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awsome story update soon!
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Title: sorry
Reviewed By: Kurama or Hiei Both Great Boy Toys [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 18:25 EST
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have to check my reviews like this but keep on reviewing and im gratful to all my reviewer
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Reviewed By: Chelle On: January 25, 2005 13:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
All right, then. Grammar is not your forté, I assume. Neither is style. Or plot. Or originality. Or...writing. If I were you, which, thankfully, I am not, I would get help. A beta, or two, or several.
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Reviewed By: Black Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 12:05 EST
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god wrok cant wait till next chappy
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 12:02 EST
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Thank you for updating. maybe you should check on your hints as to what will happen. You're still writing 'you' instead of 'she' check it, and you missed a verb, it's still in present tense. YOU AND QUEEN ARE MEGA HENTAIS!!!!!! I know you have a tendancy to sometimes blurt things out, but now all the world can see how bad it gets. I'm glad I'm not as bad as you or 'queen', yet. Update soon or, well, let's just say I know where you sleep. ^_^ peace out until next update.
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Reviewed By: KristyKamae [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 17:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ericka: PPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLEEEAAAASSSSSEEEEEEE update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love your story so much! And beleive me I KNOW GOOD STORIES when I read them. And also I rarly ever read meadia miner and if I do its only the good ones and you are in my top ten!
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Reviewed By: Kristy Kamae and Erika On: January 19, 2005 17:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ericka: PPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLEEEAAAASSSSSEEEEEEE update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love your story so much! Kristy: And beleive me I KNOW GOOD STORIES when I read them. And also I rarly ever read meadia miner and if I do its only the good ones and you are in my top ten!
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: SesshomaruInuyashaKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 18:36 EST
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i love the story. i wondering if i could be in the story as a friend of the princess or relative?
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Reviewed By: K On: January 14, 2005 23:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Updaye soon, your story is really good.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 14:03 EST
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I think a new chapter is in order here, my offer still stands, I know how slow you type, but the update is interesting, need anymore ideas? i'm offering, you know where to reach me.
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Reviewed By: Black Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 13:07 EST
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love the update lets gooooooooooooooooo
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 20:15 EST
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You better hurry up and update. I KNOW WHERE YOU SLEEP!!! I found it at last!!. ^_^ as for the side convo, sad but true, and sometimes, I wish it wasn't. If I have to come over and type it for you, I will cuz you type slow. Please take all of this as constructive criticizm (sp) and not insults, you know how I am with complements.
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Reviewed By: Black Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 23:07 EST
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still witing to see update hellloooooooo hurry up
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Reviewed By: Salanti [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 23:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
at first i'm confused. I'm just curious how this all started and that. I'm woundering things like are their going to be a lot of flash backs? What happened before they met, what will happen next? all well i'm probably just bakabakashi.(stupid) well i gtg ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Black Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 19:06 EST
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love ya story need more hurry up and reply i love you is that enough
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