| "Life Insured" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Sarahfreak On: January 04, 2006 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! I read it when you first submitted it and then added it to y favourites list and then i got the email saying you had updated it and I was like YAY. Well done and excellent finish *wink* kissy, kissy
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Title: My Review (duh!)
Reviewed By: Hanabi jou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 16:55 CST
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That was incredibly awesome! I'm so glad you decided to finish it. I remember reading this story a while back and when I saw that it was updated, I was like : "Yaaay!". Not many readers that I know, including myself, finish their stories often. Anyway, Good job! It was wonderful!
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Reviewed By: Random Person 666 On: December 29, 2005 10:21 CST
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This is a very good fic!!! I love the way you write! Please update quickly!!!
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Reviewed By: Kes KES On: April 29, 2005 17:43 CDT
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I know I usually rate at the end of a story, but the quote comes from Beauty and the Beast.
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Reviewed By: Sarahfreak On: March 23, 2005 06:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cools tory. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: elisa ang On: January 30, 2005 23:27 CST
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wowee!!! another chapter!!! please continue this!!!
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Reviewed By: eloise On: January 28, 2005 00:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Randomly stumbled over your story, and was immediately hooked. Exceedingly original idea. An insurance agent? That's great! Good hints that there's much more to your Kenshin. I also very much like your descriptions. Particularly one tiny part where you talk about the table in the break room having a scratched surface and a wobbly leg. Very visual. The insurance company and Saito make me think of Office Space. You do a nice job of keeping everyone in character, as well. Lovely writing!
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Reviewed By: Cera On: January 23, 2005 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly love this story so far^^ Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: elisa ang On: January 11, 2005 21:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wow this is absolutely fabulous!!! i dont usually review but i had ro for this one cuz itz so good!!! pleeze don stop witin this one, i hate it wen i find a reely gud story then the author never updates so pleeze dun do that!!!!
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Reviewed By: Vathara On: January 11, 2005 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this is a switch; Hiko getting Kenshin into trouble instead of trying to talk him out of it. Nice hints of a deeply buried Something Else under the mild facade. Of course you know we're all breathlessly waiting for that first clear glimpse of Battousai....
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