| "*Untitled*" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: RoninSoldier [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 11:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this story because it could really happen to someone. The author tells the story really well and I hope the next chapter/chapters come really soon!
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Reviewed By: jenna On: December 10, 2003 10:48 CST
Comment/Review:
midnight lotus said it, uppdate please! I wanna know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: midnight lotus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very powerful, I must say. It's a pretty good fic overall, but I noticed something. The story never gives any kind of hint why Tai's dad abuses him in the first place. And it can't just be because he's kinda really bad either. Why would he hurt his children???
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Reviewed By: anonymous On: May 29, 2003 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best story of its category.
Please no Taito as others have suggested. There are so many Taito stories around that I'm sick of them and this is one of the few that are not spoiled by that coupling stuff.
Please continue I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :) |
Reviewed By: sailorcelestia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 17:54 CST
Comment/Review:
wow. that was sad, but it was really good. please continue it soon. |
Reviewed By: Kurok On: November 25, 2002 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Deep man, could you put Taito in it? I would be grateful. |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: October 29, 2001 22:20 CST
Comment/Review:
that was sad. You should be the next edgar allen poe.. hehe but plze continue i cant want to c what happens.. |
