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Reviewed By: kagomegirl21 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this so far has been one interesting fic even if it did seem at times to run on and on with no real end in sight. but i have enjoyed the perspectives the thought that joey could somehow remember his life from 5000 years ago the year yami was pharoh. im wondering what all joey's friends will think when he tells them of what happened. it must be quite interesting yet unbelieveable as well.
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Reviewed By: KaibasNymph [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 11:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story it's great I love Seto and Joey
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Reviewed By: Tari Helyanwe (not logged in On: January 14, 2005 00:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so elegant! please continue, and dont let this be the end of them! it cant be!! *sniff* i know they'll find each other! *sobs*
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Title: Complicated and Sad
Reviewed By: Tamlin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 00:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished the chapers you've posted and I have to admitt, it's sad. Very sad. Everyone is just having a terrible time and seems to have been having a bad time for five thousand years. But on the brighter side, I love your writing style and the imagry you use is really powerful. I can't wait to see what else you have in store for everyone and here's hopping things will get better for them.
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