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Reviewed By: Black Rose Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Not bad at all, not bad at all! Some spelling errors--easily corrected. If you wanted help with re-editing I'd be glad to oblige! I'm not perfect, but I am pretty good with spotting spelling errors! Overall, a good fic. I like how you had everythng basically the same and then went on to just alter some small details--loved that! I want more! Hope you have a good day! Keep writing; you can only improve! Sincerely, Black Rose Lady
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 21:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow this is really good and you should add more to it please. Zirra
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Reviewed By: Thao_Lorakin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 10:30 CST
Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!! thank u
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Reviewed By: inu yashas witch [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 11:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it's going straight to my favorites
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Reviewed By: Broken_ Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this story. it has a good consept and its well writen. i hope to see you continue.
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Title: Swept away
Reviewed By: Chibish On: January 10, 2005 10:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story. I think you wrote it very well and you should continue to write fan fics. You seem to have a talent in writing and I hope to see more work from you. Goodluck. chibs
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