| "Resolution" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Kiarene [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 08:31 CST
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It was a brillant piece! I liked the play of emotions; at first I felt sorry for Trieze because Wufei seemed to be so rude and Trieze obviously cares very much for him. Then as Wufei started talking, I was like, dump him! *sniff* And the ending was just perfect!
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Reviewed By: Hi There Girlfriend On: February 11, 2005 16:13 CST
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This is actually very bittersweet. Almost like a mills and boons with the secretary in the typing pool and the big boss. I'm glad they both decided to make a new years resolution and I'm also very happy that Treize decided Wufei was more important. I'd been afraid that it would be a sad ending. But lucky it wasn't. I loved it. Totally.
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Reviewed By: Amazing On: January 18, 2005 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story. It a quick read, something sweet and short that make your mind wonder over many thing long after you finish reading the stuff. I have to admit I had difficulty seeing Wufei and Treize and that situation (I don't really like OOC) but after I have pass that, it was really good. The thing I actually like about this thing, is that it realistic. Well realist with a good ending! (It rarely end right in real life). What I actually find realistic was Wufei feeling and reaction. The fact that he still love Treize, that in the beginning he though that it was okay if he was just second in Treize life, but in the end it never enough. Something love is notall that you need And yet, seeing Treize action, something that enough, Good Work.
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Reviewed By: SPF15 On: January 10, 2005 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I felt you had some interesting angst here, but Wufei and Trieze were so out of character that it was hard to take seriously. And who the hell is Anne? It would have made more sense to marry him to Une rather than make up some random character. The last part really clinched my initial dislike. You should never try to pull the rug out from under the feet of your readers. A meaningful, logical realization is one thing (Shirley Jackson's 'The Lottery'). A total 180 is another. It leaves your audience feeling cheated and emotionally manipulated.
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Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I totally loved this, and you completely floored me at the end! Terrific one shot!
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