| "Unbreak My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: D On: April 25, 2004 19:09 CDT
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Nice, that was really cool.....but, basic math about the day means that they were having sex for a long time! Let's see...24...and, 9, JESUS, thats practically an entire day, crap, they must have really liked it....
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Reviewed By: D On: April 25, 2004 19:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice, that was really cool.....but, basic math about the day means that they were having sex for a long time! Let's see...24...and, 9, JESUS, thats practically an entire day, crap, they must have really liked it....
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Reviewed By: Anime Nut On: July 31, 2003 02:43 CDT
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That was pretty good, I wish there were more pairings of Tira/Morron. It's a pitty that no one ever writes about them, they make such a cute couple, and what is so great about Carrot anyways? |
Reviewed By: Vampkestrel On: January 02, 2003 01:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoo hoo nice tira/marron wish there was more of them.... you shold write a sequeal |
Reviewed By: The Great Death Knight On: June 24, 2002 16:34 CDT
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i have a question. didnt tira just wake up a run outside? so that means tira and marron had sex for at least 12 hours!!?!?!?!?
all and all it was a good fic |
Reviewed By: Sailor Pixie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2002 01:20 CST
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This was awesome, I love Marron/Tira fics. Those two make the cutest couple. |
Reviewed By: Duece of Spades On: October 30, 2001 17:49 CST
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I usually don't review lemons (Mostly cuz I don't want people to know I read 'em...) but this was okay. It wasn't sickningly detailed, and it was cute. The three chapters should be grouped as one though. You're stopping off in the middle of a moment too soon, and creating needless cliffhangers. |
