| "Silent Hero" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Shacel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 21:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! That was cool!!! UPDATEM UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: momadopolis On: January 09, 2005 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Only gave it a 5 on the enjoyment factor because I need to see more of the story first, however the beginning is very intriguing. Spelling needs a little work, and I wondered if you meant at one point with your reminder if you weren't going to write "when Jason writes or whether it was when the other boy spoke?" It appears to me you have a good imagination for writing. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Kingdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 22:25 CST
Comment/Review:
seeing if this works
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