| "Dirty Thoughts and Long Nights" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: anonymous_One On: May 24, 2005 12:27 CDT
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To Mr. MiSTer, Robin's real name is Dick Grayson in this series, because if you watched Fractured, Larry says his name is Nosyarg Kcid, which is Dick Grayson spelled backwards.
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Reviewed By: anonymous_One On: May 24, 2005 12:25 CDT
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Sorry, I couldn't resist after reading the last A/N. *laughs quietly* Great story, and very creative clues for the last chapter, but does Starfire really play video games that well? Oh, and very accurate description of Starfire in the first chapter... 'fuckin hot'. I can't watch the show anymore without thinking that. You seriously need to consider a beta though, your spelling and grammar sucks, no offense. Some parts are very confusing. Other than that, though, great job. I have to admire anyone who can write a lemon, because frankly, it scares the sh** out of me to even think of writing one. But I love reading them. ;-) Keep up the good work! It's been like 3 months since you updated...
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Reviewed By: anonymous_One On: May 24, 2005 12:21 CDT
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OMG, you crack me up. Screw you. You suck.
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: American Idol On Fox On: May 09, 2005 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great sex fic.I like fan fics with sex.The one where BB and Raven was in the recording room was the best.I still don't know how Cyborg can have a penis!
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Reviewed By: Danjul On: March 07, 2005 05:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderfully Hentai, keep it up.
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Title: Best ....ever......
Reviewed By: True Dark Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 02:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KICK @$$ writing! best teen titans sex i've ever seen. cuz other people just drown it with plot, these actually seem like what they would be like if they HAD days off :P anyway keep writing
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Reviewed By: inuluvsu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 10:08 CST
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Really good please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Jamer The Titan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 13:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey men, i have to say that your story is a personal favorite, i have it in my "favorites" folder, keep writing this well. Ps: i have a story too, its called A NEW TITAN, A NEW LOVE, its not about sex but i think its pretty good, would you plz review it, thanks, bye.
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Title: Raven is so sexy
Reviewed By: Majuub On: February 21, 2005 12:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it because it had all the characters in it even Bunblebee. I love Raven the best shes so hot and sexy. This is by far the best Teen Titan FanFic.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 09:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love The prologue and chapters 1-5 it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.
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Title: abslolute genius right there
Reviewed By: damien black [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 12:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally a teen titans fanfic where cyborg actually gets some. There was a little bit of typos (between 2 and 4) in the fanfic but its not much to worry about though. Its still good enough for a 10.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: call_me_the_fluffyness1 On: February 06, 2005 04:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Personaly i liked this fic...it has inspiried me to write one of my own...even though there was a bit of anal it was nice since it kind of breaks from the blow ear lick thing that was going on...but i still think robin and raven would be a beter couple...but its ur fan fic so you havf whoever you wana fuck...fuck whoeer else...
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Title: More Chapters
Reviewed By: SilentDeath [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 22:05 CST
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A good start, but you definitely need some new chapters.
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Title: Not bad
Reviewed By: Mr. MiSTer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 16:52 CST
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About beast boy's name... I believe there IS a space in it. His real name is Garfield Logan so just use that if you get confused. Your sex descriptions where good and nicely paced. Despite what you said in parenthesis it was NOT too slow, it was just right. Your dialogue needs some severe help. I couldn't understand all of it. Oh... and when they where calling out each other's names, you need to be more specific. I wasn't sure if they where using "Robin and Starfire" or "Tim Drake and Koriand'r" (I think. I've never been totally sure if this is the Tim Drake robin or the Dick Grayson robin"
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