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| "Love or Bloodlust?" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Title: What the FUCK is your problem
Reviewed By: Anime-Alee [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 21:04 CST
Comment/Review:
Ya'know, you're really startin' to piss me off royally, my patients are limited and your dancing on a fine edge missy. Keep it up, and there will be consequences, my friends don't like it when ppl pick on Anzu either. So if you wanna have them pissed at you as well as me, keep bothering my stories. If you don't like critism that TOO damn bad, Samantha is a good authoress as well as myself, you personally need more experince in that field. If you can't take that dose of "CONSTUCTIVE" critism that just proves how thick headed you are.
| Reviewed By: Crimson Alessa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 17:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
You, know I've read pleanty of these kind of stories before and all of them in general are quite unforgettable as is and this story, from far as I can tell, is no different. This story is obviously uninspired, the paragraphs and the description is rather poor, quite rushed and the characters are to quick to speak in conclusion, and to top it all off, the fashion they speak has been seen before,its unorginal. I am rather disappointed. Also, just to say, the Authur's Noting of the stories Intro is longer almost then the story itself, which is rather irrelavent so to speak, there is no excuse for that kind of behavior. Its shallow humor, fangirl ways are throwing the reader off at the start and thats rather in bad taste. So, next time, please, plan your stories out more deeper before you go and randomly type it down. Stories need time in order to gain attention. Oh and by the way, I did not enjoy you going to my friend and flamming her over such childish facts as in you hating a particular character in a certain pairing. What you felt doing to prove such a usueless pint, was unecessary. You KNOW who I am talking about.
| Reviewed By: shaddowstalker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 00:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is awsome i don't know why people ar'nt reviewing this story rox so far plez continue i want to know what happens next BI.
| Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 15:05 CST
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I love this, it`s cute and funny,and good. I hope to see more soon. Keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 10:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue soon, and mark when you start a chapter. It gets confusing in the begining
| Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm confused as to what is going on in the fic. I don't think you messed up the formating when you uploaded but something went wrong and it looks kinda weird. I don't mean to insult you, your story shows potential but you could use a beta reader. I'll do it if you want me to. My e-mail should be on my profile page if you want me to look over it. I think this story has potential and I won't mind reading more but you need to make a few changes to make it more readable for others, including me. I'm offering help but if you don't want it that's okay. Good luck with future chapters if there are any.
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