| "The First Time" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Lovely
Reviewed By: Eris of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2010 07:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that this was a wonderful story. A nice amount of angst but great romance! |
Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 20:23 EDT
Comment/Review:
awww... how cute. i like the slight awkwardness to their first eh, um session. subtly awkward. i love it. very nicely done.
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Title: The First Time
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 17:16 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: lynx9 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 19:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Post please. I want to be a writer. That is what i love to do. But High School is holding me back. I mean do i really need physics, and calculus to be a writer? Oh well, just ranting now. But Please post i love your fics, and wickedoni's too.
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Reviewed By: Evil Karyta (not loged) On: January 23, 2005 01:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah... Bless the talented writers that reside this Earth! This was one of the most tasteful, the most beautifully written one shot I have read in a very long time. Especially for Inuyasha. I must thank you for this. A very sweet, very hot lemon as not many write anymore.
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Title: Nice..
Reviewed By: Mega Dawg [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 20:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it, I'd like to see the original too.
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Reviewed By: ManonLeChat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 22:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whaddya mean this received "next to no attention" on ff.net??? *I* reviewed it! I was charmed by it! :-D This was always one of my favorites of your works, and (memorably) the first quality Inuyasha lemon I ever read. So glad you put it up again, and I'd love to see the original version in order to compare them side by side. Ha! "New to us" indeed! You underestimate your fanbase! *winks* and ^_^, Manon.
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Reviewed By: Saki--not logged on On: January 20, 2005 18:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, very nice. Nothing too drastic and complex; simple and beautiful. This is a very enjoyable fic. Keep up the awesome work.
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 18:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was beautifuly writen, I really liked it! and I know that you love sesshomaru/rin(I do to)but maybe you could write some more inuyasha/kagome story/one-shots? I LOVE them together, my next fav is sesshomaru/rin, their VERY cute together! ^_^ keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: essie2 On: January 15, 2005 23:37 EST
Comment/Review:
this is great omg great
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Title: *claps* WHOOT
Reviewed By: SugarplumFairy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 19:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This girl was the best one shot I've ever red in my life. Very simple and yet very detailed ^^ I love the story and I love you for typing it *throws cookies and candy* I loved the fact they both weren't (like what you read in most stories and sorry if I offended some one, 'cause I'm also one of those persons) where kagome and inu yasha both had their first time and where both really just going with the feeling what to do instead of being like pro's in it when it's their first time, like in a lot of stories. The part I liked the most is where inu yasha though kagome rejected him, well I mean this line "He stood behind her, his arms hanging limply at his side. Somewhere along the way things had gone horribly wrong. This wasn't the reaction he was expecting-the one he'd been hoping for, dreaming about." I don't know why but I just love this line haha ^^ I hope you write much more in the future (maybe Sango/Miroku *hint hint =P*) and i hope you get alot of reviews on this story, and people FOR ONCE REVIEW! Most ppl just read it and then go away without revieuwing. Owh well, YAY i'm the first one to review. anyeay i'm talking crap again (i'm full of it) i hope you write much muh MUCH more! Big K!$$ and much Love ~ LiL O Me (don't know under wich nickname I logged in)
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