| "Hyperman's Mega Battle Arena" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Good job!
Reviewed By: Gamefreak3000 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 15:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good for a second chapter! Oh yeah, and sorry for not doing that Jhonny Bravo vs. Dan Hibiki request! I was so busy back then! Anyway, great chapter, and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Brian Smiley On: February 03, 2005 21:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! I don't watch Excel that much, but it was great none the less. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Nenagh24 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 15:13 CST
Comment/Review:
How the heck do you get your chapters so long?! Mine are always about two-thirds of that size! ::Thinks then mutters:: Must be that lazy factor that my family is always saying I have. ::Looks back up, smiling once again:: That was great! I love how you always have those Nenagh and Joe escipades in the middle of everything! But, ::Eyes glint:: was twenty minutes enough? ::Starts laughing:: Wonderful job! ^^ Ja na!
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Reviewed By: MadWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
well damn Im getting me cool ride's at least but to be a cop I never would desire to be such, since I really don't have much to complain about I guess I sit back and wait for the whole plot to polaY out?. I also have seen you gotten much better, I would suggest you reRead it though, it was very intresting, and quite funny. (21 page's to print!, guess I just copy? grin's evily~)
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Title: (Laughs out loud)
Reviewed By: Gamefreak3000 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is hillarious! The Afro thing was so funny I almost fell out of my chair! Great job! I have one request. A catfight between Officer Jenny and Nurse Joy (One part that invovles Pokemon and another that invovles mud-wrestling). Whoever wins gets Brock! Oh yeah, and thanks for putting me in it!
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Reviewed By: Charmeleon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 13:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad so far. This is pretty good. But can you leave swearing and cuss words out when it comes to me talking because I feel that I can get my point across without swearing or cussing. I know that this is just a fiction story, but it still makes me feel a little uncomfortable.
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Reviewed By: Nenagh24 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 16:01 CST
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::Laughing her head off:: I don't know how you do it! That was so like me, it was scary! The whole Joe session was great! Love the whole "What were you doing in the closet?" part! ::Pauses:: I should stop using these: ! ... they kind of lose the emphasis after a bit... Hope you update soon! ^^ Ja na!
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