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| "Rosemary For Remembrance" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Title: Almost Speechless
Reviewed By: YugureIko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing. Simply amazing. Aside from a few minor errors in grammer, this was probably the greatest fanfics I've ever read. You are a truly talented writer. Even though some of this was hard to believe, you presented it in such a way that made it believable. It was an almost flawless work, truly. *bows* I can only hope to write as wonderfully as you some day. One question, though: Is Hanabi really THAT horrible? Or did you just develop her into that persona for the story. I've only seen as far into the series as they've shown on Cartoon Network so I haven't gotten a decent glimpse of Hanabi's personality. She's not really like that, is she? If so, icky. Gross. Kill it with fire! (or poison) Also, I was a little confused with the whole incident with Sasuke. What were he and Naruto doing, exactly? Sorry if it makes me sound dumb. ...But, anyway... thanks for giving me something so wonderful to read. Please keep writing.
| Title: Good Job
Reviewed By: MorrisonQuote [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 01:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that I initially came across this with impure intentions and a dismissing mind. But, I was proven wrong. On the whole, this fiction stands above many others. Your writing, although peppered with Japanese early on (a characteristic I think authors should frown upon) and subject to occasional word-choice errors, in addition to various other grammar errors, your story is very moving, and very painful, which was, I suppose your purpose. Although difficult to deal with all in one sitting, it leaves everything clear in my mind. I hope you keep writing.
| Title: ...
Reviewed By: Kikilo_Lea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a well written fanfic. Its just like a real novel. Sometimes, it got so sad that I wanted to cry. But, the ending was great. It was a bittersweet ending. The last thing I'll say to you is that above all of the hundreds of fanfics I've read, this is the best of them all.
| Title: All I can say is: wow...
Reviewed By: ftmboi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 03:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now, I want you to know that this isn't just empty flattery. I rarely give someone a 10 rating, because usually there are some nagging errors even if the story is really exceptional. But this... This is art. This is what I spend hours and hours sifting through crap fanfics to read. I mean, I don't normally read het stuff, I just glanced at this by chance. I am really glad I did, because this is absolutely fucking brilliant. It's gripping, beautiful, tragic, and brings a sense of real-ness to the characters. And you've handled the characters masterfully, might I add (even if I mildly hate you for killing Shino...). And the attention to detail is stunning--you paint the story with your words. I only wish I could write this well. So keep it going, because I am really looking forward to how you'll play this out.
| Reviewed By: Honey Sue [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 02:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Woo!!! such a tragic fic!...i love it! update it asap!
| Reviewed By: endless_calendar On: March 04, 2005 11:13 CST
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I love this fic! I've been a Hinata Neji fan for the longest time and I love this one...Some Naruto adn Hinata fluff is the best way to make a Neji and Hinata fic! Q_Q I love you!
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