| "Jailbirds" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: psychotic_gun_wielding_bizatch [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh! what's Sango in for? *gets all wide-eyed* lol just playin'...well not really o.O ...i really love this fic so far...newayz i hope to a new chappie soon and all, c'ya 'till then...late
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Reviewed By: neshee On: August 16, 2005 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story update again soon hope inuyasha is in the next chap
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 02:14 CDT
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Wow, you updated this quickly!! *I'm not complaining* This was a really good, intense chapter. I felt sorry for both of the girls. Ohs a cliffy!! I am really looking forward to the next chapter, to see why Sango is there!!*swats spam code*
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 13:07 CDT
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Ohhs you updated!! I cannot wait to find out more about Sango!! Loved the whole thought process of this!! The way you are writing the prison is very realistic and not sugar coated!! Good Job on this!! Awws I do not mind waiting, as you did update moments!!! *checks under bathroom sink*
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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: futekioosha (MMO is being silly about letting me sign in) On: May 14, 2005 14:09 CDT
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Thank you for submitting your fic to FFARG. This first chapter of your fiction was an enjoyable easy read with only minor grammar issues, that when taken into account did not detract the reader from your overall storyline. You've done a good job controlling the flow of the chapter by telling the story from Kagome's point of view. As far as characterization is concerned, the small glimpse of Miroku's personality seemed to be the most on point. We really didn't get to see much of Sango's character, and Kagome seems a little off. The type of wit you've given her doesn't really conform to what is generally conceived about Kagome's character. Over all, this chapter was a good introduction for your fiction leading easily to your next. I'm sure that in future chapters you will disclose why you chose to use the cast of IY in this storyline, because at this point it is not clear. As it is written, I can easily see this first chapter as the beginning of an equally entertaining original fiction. ~futekioosha~
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 04:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. You have talent for writing in AU!! Love the originality of this story…Good Job!!
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Reviewed By: youkaiinuluver On: February 23, 2005 07:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!Please update soon!
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Title: ok...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: February 19, 2005 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ayumi is the one with the curly hair i think! and eri is the one with the hair band i think then again i'm not intirely sure! well keep up the good work and update again soon pleasE?
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Title: chap 2
Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 03:22 CST
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Another good chapter. Very original story idea. Good job!! Im really enjoying reading this. TY
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Reviewed By: GothycCoalChambr (logged out) On: February 18, 2005 23:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good chappie. i like this fic and i think it has a great start. keep up the good work and i'll keep on reading it. can't wait for the next chappie, i hope it's up soon. please update soon, i really wanna know what happens next.
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Title: wow....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is realy origanal i've never read something like this before well keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: ficfan7 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 22:40 CST
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I like the new chapter, you did good work with the character descriptions, update soon.
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 07:51 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Very good and original! Cannot wait to see where you go with this story!!
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Reviewed By: HappyBunnyBabe On: February 02, 2005 19:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Cool. I think you might have something here. Please continue to write so that I may write more reviews. The more you update the more reviews I shall leave. Sayonara
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Reviewed By: GothycCoalChambr (sorry not signed in right now) On: January 26, 2005 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very different. i can't wait for the next chapter. please update soon.
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