Reviewed By: Kitsuneko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 23:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute. The style is a little iffy, but not in some massively painful way. The mention of his father... thing scares me. I find him creepy. I like your Yusuke. He's got that honest, flat out way of speaking, which is true to him.
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