| "Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: PLEASE FIX GRAMMAR!
Reviewed By: ChrisKaz958 On: April 28, 2005 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The first word in each sentence in each line is missing. Could you please fix that?! It makes reading it VERY difficult! If you canfix it, please do because its hard only reading part of a sentence and only part of what's going on. It's very confusing! I can't read your entire story AND supply words for the begining of each sentence! Thank you, it would be a great help! Others wise, the story is good!
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Reviewed By: gilmork On: January 29, 2005 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Boring? What a strange comment for someone to have made. I found the first couple of chapters pretty much enthralling. But the formatting is so wonky that it's hard to read (that's the only reason I put a 5 down for spelling and grammar). Otherwise, the story's great! Keep up the good work! (And fix that formatting! It's hard to read if the first word is gone from every sentence!)
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Reviewed By: Hayashi Panthera [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohh yeah and my ratings are above.
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Reviewed By: Hayashi Panthera [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 21:26 CST
Comment/Review:
The story so far is boing pretty good so far. But probably the reason why so many people aren't reviewing is the first two chapters are boring and a turn off so readers lose intrest. The other thing that would help the story along is if you added alittle bit more romance in the story.
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Title: cccc
Reviewed By: rachainu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Testing, testing. Let's see if this works.
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