| "Survival of the Pack" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hyena On: May 20, 2008 15:34 CDT
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UUUUUPPPPDDDAAAAATTTEEEEEEE please
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Reviewed By: Hiein On: May 03, 2008 07:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update this story whenever you can.
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Reviewed By: DJ Luna On: February 26, 2008 16:44 CST
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It has been a while since my last review. Well, I'll say the same stuff as before. Try to update this story as soon as possible and please do not give it up. Take care.
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Reviewed By: Unmasked Fox On: July 24, 2007 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story, absolutley adore it. Can't wait to see the rest sooner or later. I just hope that you didn't give this fic up, it's too good for that to happen. Take all the time you need, it's your story after all.
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Reviewed By: Hyena On: July 19, 2007 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
UUUUUUPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAATTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEE thank you.
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Reviewed By: XboX 540 On: July 16, 2007 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Kouga gave up on Kagome way earlier than usual. Even if he's starting to be interested in Ayame as a mate rather than Kagome, I think he'd still be ticked off about Inuyasha's attention for her, especially because he is a hanyou. By doing so though means that you eleminate this 'plot string' almost immeditaly and give space for something else to happen. That's ok, it's your story after all and Kagome never actually gave Kouga the impression that she was interested in him in that way, so all in all, it all fits. I just hope that Kouga wouldn't be dropped because of this though, 'cause he's a good character on the whole. Thank you for this story, and take care.
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Reviewed By: XboX 540 On: July 16, 2007 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Kouga gave up on Kagome way earlier than usual. Even if he's starting to be interested in Ayama as a mate rather than Kagome, I think he'd still be ticked off about Inuyasha's attention for her, especially because he is a hanyou. But doing so means that you eleminate this 'plot string' almost immeditaly and give space to something else to happen. That's ok, it's your story after all and Kagome never actually gave Kouga that she was interested with him in that way, so all in all, it all fits. I just hope that Kouga wouldn't be dropped because of this though, 'cause he's a good character on the whole. Thank you for this story, and take care.
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Reviewed By: Hyena On: July 16, 2007 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UUUUPPPPPDDDDDAAAAAATTTTEEEEEEEE please.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 01:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting story... really like it so far... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: DJ Luna On: June 05, 2007 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to see what will happen next, even if you will not update this story as much as your more well-known story. Both are good, but I slightly prefare this one (so many wolves at once in a Inuyasha fanfic! That's quite rare!). When you have some time to continue and complete this with new chapters, please do! I definatly like your fanfic! Thank you for such a well-developed story! (& I can't wait to see how will Inuyasha manage to make Kagome his without trouble-suuure-! Things are quite different than usual here...here there are poltics involved too!)
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Title: Pleeese update! This story's good!
Reviewed By: Hyena On: April 01, 2007 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UUUUPPPPDDDAAAAAATTTTEEEEEE pleeese
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Reviewed By: Bluesavorqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 15:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Update update update
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Title: Chapter 06
Reviewed By: Alzea On: August 10, 2006 05:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleese update soon, thank you!
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Reviewed By: Ochiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 21:07 CDT
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Woah. *stares at the other reviews* I guess they really want you to update, huh? Not that I'm going to blame them, of course. ^^ I'm really entranced by this fic - I like how you've made them all members of a wolf pac. And what's this Sesshomaru mentioned about a Spring Festival in one the chapters? I know you haven't updated since last March, but you mentioned that you've already got the next chapter handwritten, and I'd love to see it up. In any case... You've got some amazing talent; and I hope to see the next chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: raven of the dark [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 09:14 CDT
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I love your fanfics... they are so great... update soon!!! asap!!!
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