| "Survival of the Pack" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: BloodRedMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 06:17 CDT
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love how its going please update soon ^^
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Reviewed By: I'm Hiei81 On: April 10, 2006 22:10 CDT
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I'm going to hunt you down and make you write more!!!! Don't think I won't!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: angel_of_hope [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 22:56 CST
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Wow, is all I can say. I love it, but you need to update soon. Please, I want to read more.
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I definitely like this story. Youkai society, politics, intrigue, and trouble from those pesky humans. Very fun. And a strong, somewhat animalistic Kagome. Hot. I'm curious, does Kagome also have the power to choose mates for her pack? I suppose the way she is it's not a power she'd normally use, but it's an ammusing thought that she might command Miroku and Sango to mate because they just won't do it on their own (assuming the traditional dynamic of Sango being too stubborn and Miroku too dense for their relationship to progress). About Tsuki Shikon meaning "Moon Jewel", I thought Shikon was the "Four Souls" part of Shikon no Tama, and Tama meant "jewel". Actually, the use of Japanese is a bit strange, since the currency would indicate this doesn't take place in Japan. I guess it could be an alternate Japan, but silver thistles sounds like something from a completely alternate world. Or a flower.
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Title: come
Reviewed By: leyley On: September 20, 2005 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update u little weasle
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Title: i like it
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am really enjoying this story i do hope you continue on with this and post another chapter again real soon.
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Reviewed By: LEYLEY On: August 31, 2005 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE ALREADY
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Title: do it
Reviewed By: JGUJFVJ On: August 12, 2005 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i told you once and i'll do it again UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
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Title: come on
Reviewed By: leyley On: July 25, 2005 08:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update update UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
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Reviewed By: ladyrin_remix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 13:40 CDT
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I love your story. Please keep it up. I can't wait to read what happens next.
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Reviewed By: sadsoul On: May 20, 2005 23:56 CDT
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You left us hanging at ff.net know don't leave us hanging at mm.org. We love this story. Now get motivated abd give us a little something. please!
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Reviewed By: dark sapir [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 11:40 CDT
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please update soon!
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: foxfire730 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really a great fic!! I actually found it on aff.net, but also found it here on mm.org. so i'll just stick with here (^_^) I always love fics that kave Kagome as a hanyou, and I am so gald that I found this one! Kagome is portrayed as a strong, intelligent, spitfire attitude hanyou leader, and I love it! Inuyasha, is portrayed as a young, reckless, strong, hot (of course) hanyou that won't take crap from anybody. It's absolutley GREAT! I like how you have Inuyasha's and Sesshomaru's realationship, to me they're protective over eachother with at least a litle respect ( I mean they're in the same pack and not triying to kill eachother, how much better can it get?), but they're not all buddy buddy i love brother. And i LOVE how Kikyo is the "slut" of the pack!! The way Inu and Kag's were introduced to eachother is great! I can't wait till the next chapter! Also, I LOVE your fic Strength of Bond. I have recommended it to a lot of my cyber friends! N E Wayzz i can't wait till the next chapter! Update soon!
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Title: AWSOME!!!!
Reviewed By: Hanyou_Grl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS FIC ROCKS!!!!! ITS AWSOME!!!! I LUV IT!!! I LUV HOW INU N KAG BOTH ARE HANYOUS & BOTH LIKE EACH OTHER BUT DONT KNOW IT SORTA!!!! THAT SLUT KIKYO NEEDS TO DIE!!!!! ::THROWS KIKYO INTO A KILLER WHALES TANK:: HEHEHE IF ONLY DREAMS COULD COME TRU WELL N E WAYS THIS FIC IS SOOOOOO AWSOME!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!! PLEZZZZZZZZZZ I LUV THIS FIC!!!!! I LUV IT!!!! ITS LIKE MY FAV!!!!! oh crap look at the time i g2g practice for Hip Hop class 2morrow!!!!!!!!!!! its awsome i luv this fic almost as much as i luv hip hop & art ALMOST!!!! well keep writing much luv!!!! p.s: UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva(nsi) On: March 06, 2005 09:35 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes, this one too. another great chapter. keep it up!
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