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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww that was so cute!
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Title: wow, sari! that was so in-character! i could REALLY see that happening!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've reread this more times that i can remember! i love this so much! KAWAII!!! funny, sweet, original, not OOC (though, OOC is fine, too)...everything left me with a goofy grin and a sore tummy (oh the laffter!) u rock, sari! this was a really great bday gift! and, as i read, sue really loved it, as well! ur VERY talented! KUTGW! lata!
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Reviewed By: kt On: September 24, 2006 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha loved it!
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Reviewed By: MIKANATSUME=SAKURASYARON=INUYASHAKAGOME On: June 09, 2006 05:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ITS A REALLY ENJOYABLE STORY BUT IT GOT IRRITATING WHEN INUYASHA JUST LEFT OHHHHHH!HEHEHE GOOD JOB!!
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Reviewed By: QueenTatooine [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 15:53 CDT
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Very nice. Well written and very fun to read. ~QueenTatooine
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Reviewed By: Akada On: April 26, 2006 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww i loved this story it was amazing i hope you will make other chapeters that lead to what happends to them though....but over all i think it had to have been the best inuyasha story that i have read and i have been reading them for 5 years! Yours was soo cute!!! yay 88888888 88 88 8888888 8888888 88 8 88 8 88 88 88 8 8 88 88 88888888 88 888888 88
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: March 26, 2006 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought your one-shot was amazing. I humbly bow to your talent. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: me On: March 19, 2006 07:18 CST
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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Title: Joo Made Mah Day
Reviewed By: Barachan22 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Sarah! Today was a cruddy cruddy day...this made me smile. Great story!
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Title: awwwww!
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: September 26, 2005 20:35 CDT
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Oh my gosh I adore this story!! How sweet!! ::fluffy sigh:: heh I've been looking for some inu/kag fluff recently and this hit the spot! I just love the way you told this story and the first kisses! But oh Miroku, I don't think he'll ever learn! lolol. This was just such a sweet and charming little fic and I'm so glad that I finally was able to read it! Sorry it took me so long :hug: You really do have a natural gift for writing!
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Reviewed By: Cougiecat On: June 27, 2005 23:10 CDT
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ooooo wonderful wonderful story. beautiful. poor Miroku so pittiful. umm yeah anyway umm *gets down from fluff land* very well written. beautiful descriptions. It's always fun watching Kagome talk about getting the right 'mood'.
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 17:44 CDT
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Aww! how cute! I really like this story! It was nice and long, plus the kiss was really cute! This story has to be one of my favorites of all the Inuyahsa ones^.^
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Reviewed By: RadiosNmyHead [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 12:32 CST
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I really like this one-shot. The story is really cute and the characters are totally believable. I also like that you gave Miroku and Sango a fair share of the plot when they get overlooked so often. The one critique I have would be to be careful with sentence fragments. Other than that, great story and I wish it were longer!
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Reviewed By: Lina-sama On: March 26, 2005 18:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWWHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! THIS WAS THE GREATEST ONE-SHOT I EVER READ!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Aquamarine [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 03:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! We have not one, but TWO couples' first kisses. This fic is pure, fluffy goodness. Kagome's a little scary when she tries to play matchmaker, isn't she? And, I definitly like your ending ^_^ LOL It would be wonderous if you ever felt the desire to follow your lovely piece of fiction up with a sequel... but I'm just happy you posted this one!
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