| "Acceptance" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kudari On: March 25, 2005 14:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what happens next? *anticipating next chapter* this is the best Kagome and Sesshomaru story I have read
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 12:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw man, what a mean cliffy. You just had to leave me and others hanging like that? Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 23:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definitely better. More time to build up the cliffhanger. I hope Sesshomaru didn't see Kagome being kissed by Hitan. Or if he did, I hope he doesn't think she wanted it. I mean, she loves Sesshomaru, plus she's very weak from the fight. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next.
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Reviewed By: yamifan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 23:38 CST
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write the next chapture soon.ok?peace^_^
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Title: Acceptance
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 13:38 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 20:48 CST
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Kagome, you're going to regret leaving. But then I am sure that what she needs to do only she can do. Hope for more soon, later.
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Reviewed By: GoldenEyedGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 09:23 CST
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omg.. you can't let her betray his trust.. you just can't! lol... great job.. good luck on your upcoming chapter and please update as soon as you can...
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl *not logged in* On: March 08, 2005 06:39 CST
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This is soooo good!! ^_^ Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad to hear it. Don't worry about rambling. It's not rambling as long as what you're saying makes a little bit of sense. I'm guilty of that myself. I think Kagome really needs to listen to her gut on this. If she's having doubts, then it's probably not a good idea to leave the palace and start something. If she leaves, then who's going to protect Rin? The Southern Lord might take Rin instead, and that wouldn't be good. Unless Kagome leaves and does some serious butt kicking, then it's all good. Hey, why not some divine intervention if things get a bit hairy?? Her friends are dead, so they can jump in a bit I think. I think it's cool that Kagome's pregnant. Damn, that was fast. Although, it's not exactly stated how many times they've mated...
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Reviewed By: chibimech On: February 27, 2005 19:41 CST
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previous chapter: "...but Sesshomaru realized that she did not need a lesson in courtly behavior, but that he needed a lesson in love." current chapter: kagome:"I hate you." Sessoumaru nearly giggled. what??????
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Reviewed By: chibimech On: February 27, 2005 19:33 CST
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The story is pretty good, my only prob is that you made sess...schizophrenic. Ex. he said he thought he loved her, then he's carving letters in her back
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 22:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, what a fun way to alleviate boredom and help with training...start a war. With Kagome in heat, that could be entertaining. Don't worry about rambling, you haven't done it yet.
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Title: aww....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 14:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
traning is always funner that way so keep up the good work and update again soon pleasE?
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Reviewed By: GoldenEyedGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 09:36 CST
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wow.. this is really good and I can't wait to see what happens, hehe... pretty great so far.. update soon, k? good luck
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: SMO [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I started reading this story at 6 this morning and now its 10 (did have to take a few breaks though to keep from crying (i'm a big baby)). I love how you had made Inu Yasha the way you did, never expected it. I hope you update soon. I cant wait to read the next chapter.
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