| "Acceptance" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru-San [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 09:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chappie. If you don't write another one soon I'm so goona kill you for it. Also at the end of the last chappie I liked but a little too emotional for the Cold,Heartless Taiyoukai all of us have come to understand. And way too expresion. I mean he does show some but not much so do it and be fine. Also advise never put Sesshoumaru in OOC cause some people and fans don't like that as do I. I went on the fourm and I saw noone liked OOC-ness or the main Kikyou-Inuyasha or InuYasha calling Kagome "You bitch". So please keep OOC-ness to minimum. Oh and reason this review is so damned long sorry just wanted to infrom you about what all the other people thinks about this Sesshoumaru/Kagome fics. So anyways just update soon and don't be tooo hasty if a fight were to occur with Sesshoumaru and InuYasha over Kagome.^.^ so please do put up the next chappie as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru-San [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 08:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again a Good chapter yet you left it at a cliff hanger. I will not forget this! Now get on with the next chappy before I get Really pissed at you.
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru-San [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 08:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again I review to say this was a Damn good chapter. Kept me on my feet all the way to the end. I can't wait for the next chapter.Now get to it before I..." *he pulls Toukijin from his belt* "...Kill you.
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru-San [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 08:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter. Sorry about the typo earlier I was hyper and couldn't see straight T.T Anyways write more and be good I expect more from you in the future. Now don't disappoint me or the other writers of this story. "I'm reviewing every chap so expect me to do this.
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Reviewed By: GoldenEyedGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 08:13 CST
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Love it... and I can't wait to find out what happens and everything... and boy that is soo true.. Jealousy is a man eater lol.... update soon k?
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru-San [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 08:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a good fic so far and if you don't get more chaps in then I'll *hands start to glow gree* I hate cliff hangers so be ready to recieve some pain if you don't get it in.
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Title: pyropixie
Reviewed By: pyropixie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 20:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Good story ^___^
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Reviewed By: twiddledee [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 18:07 CST
Comment/Review:
U must update!!!!
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Reviewed By: Golden_Eyed_Girl On: January 18, 2005 15:50 CST
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Please update as soon as you can.. love this story.
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Reviewed By: parsnip [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 16:34 CST
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Oh! I forgot to add something. I love cliffhangers! Makes one actually look forward to the next chapter. Now if only I could write them. . . . .
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Reviewed By: parsnip [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Heheh, Sesshoumaru is jealous! I love a jealous inuyoukai :-) I like where this story is going by the way. Poor kagome. Keep up the good work! Technicalities: I just you would like to know that you keep referring to multiple hands/arms before Kagome has a chance to heal it for him. um...I think that was the only thing I saw. Again, wonderful writing!
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Reviewed By: twiddledee1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 12:10 CST
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ohh come on!!! how could you? Not fair! waaaaaa!!!! Hurry up and update! (sniffs)
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Reviewed By: chezagirl05 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG at the end of the third chapter I was expecting more of the story. I got so into it, then it stopped as if the world stopped spinning, BRING BACK THE AIR PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
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Title: Acceptance
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 19:56 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it!!! Please update soon!!
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