| "From Klutz To Supermodel..." Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: sorry
Reviewed By: LaLa13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 15:43 CDT
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Sorry if I sounded kind of rude before. It's been a couple months since I wrote that review, and looking back I can see that it was uncalled for. You have every right to portray Kikyo as evil if you want to. I can also see how a lot of people need to use Kikyo because of her relationship with Inuyasha. But that's going a tad bit off topic... Anyways, I really like this story. I won't ask you to update quickly, because I'm a writer myself and I know how hard it is to write under pressure. Take your time. I'm going to add you to my favorites so I know exactly when you update. your patient reviewer, LaLa13 P.S. Would you mind reading one of my stories? You don't have to, but I would really appreciate it. And I did mean everything I said.
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Title: some questions....
Reviewed By: LaLa13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 08:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story so far, but I have a few bones to pick with you. First of all, why does everyone always portray Kikyo as the evil character?? Why not Kagura or someone who is truly evil? Kikyo didn't do anything in the manga! Well, she did try to kill InuYasha, but only because she thought that he had tried to kill her I mean, Kikyo is like, mky favorite character! Why be so mean! She's innocent! Don't forget that she saved Yash's life in the second movie! So the debt is repaid! Another thing, will Kouga be in this fanfic? I love the jealousy between InuYasha and Kouga. It's one of the best parts!!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 21:48 CST
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I like your story, I could copy and paste it and send it to you if you want for the first chapter...if you can't find it. Please, don't keep us on a cliffy!!!
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Title: WHERE THE F*** IS THE FIRST CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: anonymous hater On: March 20, 2005 21:35 CST
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hey! where's the goddammed first chapter! oh, men this sucks! you're hiding it aren't you??? well, i'm really sorry for such rudeness, but i think your fanfic is great! well written, i can say! but please unhide your first chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 10:13 CST
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I think this a good story I like reading it I hope you up date soon on it
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 07:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe, thank-you for giving credits....! i luv this! i can't wait to find out what kind of ending you have! plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
please give credit to the goosebumps book: 'be careful what you wish for' this is the exact same storyline
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Reviewed By: LaDDee_WaRRioR [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 20:24 CST
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Reviewed By: LaDDee_WaRRioR [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Very well done I like it ... please continue with it
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 15:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, I like this story. I hope you'll continue!
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Reviewed By: Cattykit (nsi) On: January 14, 2005 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha! That was great! I really liked it. A little on the short side, but I'm sure there's more to come and soon, right? *wink wink, nudge nudge* Anyway, I enjoyed it and I can't wait until Inuyasha comes into the picture. You've got a great idea here. Kagome is really clumsy! I hope you update soon. ~cattykit~
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Reviewed By: Michi-Chan6 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 08:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Great start!Please update soon!
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Title: Keep Going!!
Reviewed By: lonewolfcries [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 07:24 CST
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Hey, Just read the first part of your story. Sounds interesting, I hope you'll put up another chap soon. Just curious, is their going to be a revenge plot against Kikyo and that they actually follow through with it. Anyway keep going, Looking forward to the next installment, ~Lonewolf
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Title: Keep Going!!
Reviewed By: lonewolfcries [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 07:24 CST
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Hey, Just read the first part of your story. Sounds interesting, I hope you'll put up another chap soon. Just curious, is their going to be a revenge plot against Kikyo and that they actually follow through with it. Anyway keep going, Looking forward to the next installment, ~Lonewolf
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Reviewed By: chocolove On: January 14, 2005 03:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
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hi there miss cypress! i was just browsing the site when i saw your fic! it was nice but i wish you would upload it fast!
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