| "Trapped Under The Knife" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Your story is #1
Reviewed By: RamenLuver88 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG you story is sooo Great. The emotion in you story is really good. this story has so much detal and i felt loke i was there! God you have talent SO Please continue this story because i want to read more. you have a gift in the art of fanfics.luve ya Leki ^_^
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Reviewed By: Yushi On: March 06, 2005 17:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Write. The. Rest. Of. The. Story. Now. Or. Very. Soon.^_^ Please? This is great, but nothing much has happened. Pluse InuYasha's pigheadedness prevented him from telling the paramedics straight out that he would be fine. THAT would have been an interesting development... And thank God that he was hanyou and not full youkai... although if he was, this probably never would have happened. hmmmm... ^______^
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Reviewed By: inuyashaobsessor13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I love your story it is so good! I hope to see more chapters in the future so keep updating! ^_^
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Title: Whoa! Nice job...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 13:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You told that so well...I could see it happening. That's always a fear when InuYasha is in the modern world; being found out. And worse; being caught. Your handling of the emotions was great, I could almost hear him grunt with pain. *eye-rolling* ---Your prologue when InuYasha is allowed conciousness and finally released on the technicality that he is, at least, part human...his thoughts and the horror of reality leaving it's marks on his psyche and his overall determination to see Kagome again; riveting. ---- I want to see where you take this.
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