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| "Faln'ro" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: o0kittyblue0o [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2009 07:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok i just left you one review so here's another. awww no lemons! LOL beautiful story, how do you come up with the saiyajin language? I just made a system of mixing letters of the alphabet and so now I have a little something to make weird words with.
| Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was so completley awsome, just like you're other stories! i loved it so much, it portrays the bulma/Vegeta concept very well, just like your other fanfics! i especially loved Vegeta in this one! *starts to mop up the ocean of drool on desk and keyboard, but ends up drooling more due to the mental image of Vegeta in that turtle neak...^_^*
| Title: Cheese alert but good
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even with the 'cheese alert' I really loved this entertaining tale. Vegeta's interaction with Daisuke was endearing and realistic. I loved the shaving scene in particular. Also the way in which he diverted the negativity away from the dinner by stating his thanksgiving was a nice touch. I enjoy coming back to read this.
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