| "When I Wake UP" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Boo Hoo!
Reviewed By: msissyburrows [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2009 18:39 CST
Comment/Review:
That was way to sad! But I liked it it was touching but sad to see that This Vegeta is some what cold to Bulma as her pregnancy(SP?) goes to term. I still liked it and the snuggles at the end were the bomb!
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Reviewed By: Bulma the babe2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2009 07:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok...this was an amazing story. I admit I got teary eyed...One step away from having a good cry. This was an amazingly moving story. My ex left me when I was four months pregnant. I was 8 months pregnant my first Mother's day...i went to get portraits taken...just me and my pregnant belly...and I was pretty much in tears the ENTIRE day because people kept making comments about the significant other i was supposed to have. I WISHED I had that other person to hold me and tell me it was alright. Its nice to see Vegeta written like this...too many people write him as having left Bulma as soon as she got pregnant. He has too much honor for that. So, Bravo for the amazing story :)
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Reviewed By: Cellar_Door [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sweet it made my teeth hurt! :D
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Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!! i agree with the other two - this story is just so sweet! i love reading bulma vegeta fics like this! i also love your other ones too! ^_^ they're all so sweet, and portray the two so well - especially Vegeta! ^_^. please, write more like this, i love all of your stories anyway! ^_^
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Title: aaaw!
Reviewed By: Free-sprit ( to god damn lazy to log in) On: June 09, 2005 14:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I so agree with trisha, it's sooo sweet. aaaw, I can't top smiling! I loved it! keep it up, it doesn't mattr tht no one revive, screw them, I love your writing style. :)
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Reviewed By: Trisha On: May 01, 2005 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww that was so sweet. cant believe i havent read this before
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