| "Songs of the Mind" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Hieis_Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! i love this story! please please update soon! i love it!
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Reviewed By: soul_stealer_25 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 17:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice. I like the story, it's pretty cool. Please write more.
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Reviewed By: gothic_raven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 21:45 CST
Comment/Review:
its very good try to write more though i hope that you will update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: FreakyTikiBeachBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 14:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story, it makes me just want to read more! The open ends will draw me back, but I just hope they get finished eventually. Really cool.
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Title: Really good start!
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 06:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the direction this story is going, but you've left some gaping holes in the storyline, although I realize you need some of that to further things slowly. I agree with your other reviewer: Parts DO seem rushed and I wonder why her father's control will lessen. For what it's worth, your Sp & Gr are pretty good! Just take a little more time to describe things like what's going on in her head, more of what was happening to Robin in Nevermore, etc. I think your best description was somewhere near the part when she fainted and Robin took her in his arms. Remember, description is the flavor of any story and is what brings that story to life! Keep it up! I look forward to reading more of this!
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Reviewed By: Crossover Magician [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting, interesting. Nice fic, but I just have to say that some parts are just too rushed, kinda like my fics. Well anyways, I do support RobxRae fics, oh, and how come Raven can become almost like any normal girl in two months? and who's Jacob? And how did Star and BB become a relationship? Could you please continue?
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Reviewed By: Kinsha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 09:26 CST
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Come on people! write something!!
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