| "Kokoro no Tsumi" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: leisa@extremehope.org
Reviewed By: AloeVera On: June 01, 2004 19:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks a lot ... I now have a rabid plot bunny hanging unto my ankle ... wait ... did I see a hint of fang? No! Seriously, this is well-done and I'm really enjoying it-- particularly the disclaimer ;p
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Reviewed By: Dezz [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2002 12:46 CST
Comment/Review:
I love your characters. They interact very well together. Dialogue is great, plot flow is great. My only gripe is perhaps your chapters are too short. You can probably combine several of your chapters into one, since a lot of them are separate scenes to a larger scheme. Good job. |
Reviewed By: digibitch [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2001 13:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story so far. (I've read the prologue chapter 1. I came on to check out my own stuff, but noticed your ficcie and I got interested.) You have a pretty good plot so far. I like how you write sort of mysteriously.
You should really put this in the new orginals section that was just made after we authors bugged dear ol' root-oms in the forums.
DB
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