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Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEEEYYY! What's up? Why haven't you updated?
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Title: SUMMER IS HERE!
Reviewed By: Crystal3469 On: June 24, 2005 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI! This fanfic rocks! And it's summer now,so can u please update? PLEASE?!
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Reviewed By: Moonpelt On: May 30, 2005 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update please. update please. please please please please!
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Reviewed By: tricksters thief girl On: March 27, 2005 23:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ummmmmmmmmmm...*pokes crystal* *poke*are you alive? *poke* if you are...UPDATE so i now wether eny one dies slow and pain full deaths! muhahahaaaaaaaa...i had pixi sticks I HEARD SOME ONE SAY PIXI STICKS WERE ARE THEY?!?!?!? i shall rule the world!!!*suger attack over back to normal now(if i ever was normal)*...you now with enough coffee i could rule the world*starts to think up plan*...
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Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 17:34 CST
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Poor Crystal, she's all hurt and stuff. Nya, I hope she recovers soon!
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Reviewed By: trickstersthiefgirl On: March 23, 2005 12:21 CST
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nice! is she dead?.........no efence but i love storys were the people die slow and painfull deaths in the middle of the story!^_^
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Reviewed By: Animefreak11 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 17:48 CST
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meeep! *whimpers* i'll try mah best... :P that chapter was funny, and it IS weird that only Crystal is guilty.... how strange... ?_? oh well... i have to finish homework... -____- and i so don't want to write mah essays!!!! T_T i'm gonna diiiiie, it was nice meeting you, good bye. oh err wait! UPDATE! ^^U
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Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 18:45 CST
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Another good chapter, but just so you know it's Makai not Makia...nya. Update soon! ~Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Animefreak11 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 21:12 CST
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LOL we had festival friday... and we got a 2.. oh well we have another one this wednesday and we hope to get a 1.... ^^;; florida is coming soon!!!! that chapter was-- interesting! hehehe UPDATE!!!! :P
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Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 22:35 CST
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You might to spell check somtimes, but other than that I continue to love this...poor Crystal. Her shirt came off? Damn, that reminds me of those bad nightmares where you go to school without any clothes on...*shudder, shudder* ANYwayz, update ASAP! ~Ja
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Reviewed By: Animefreak11 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 18:05 CST
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*is confused* @.@ err....... suuuuuuuuuure.... >> well i g2g to band rehearsal for 2 hrs cuz we're going to disneyworld during spring break soooooo yeah..... update!!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 12:57 CST
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awww...Hiei ditched her...T-T *throws a rock at Hiei* Funny chapter, I loved it! I wonder when they are going to find out that Crystal and Roran are youkai too....hmmm...*ponders* ~Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Animefreak11 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 12:20 CST
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O.O how dare u!!!!! >< no hw???? T.T lucky!!!!!!! lol err... i wrote a one shot!!! ^^ but its not on mm yet cuz it was been stupid and messing up all my spaces so its on ff, fosff, e-fic, animespiral... ^_^ its called err... "Suzuka's choice" but anyway that chapter was funny!!! but i wonder when they're gonna get busted about being demons... ya know... mwahahhaha hiei ditched her!!! *points and laugh before slipping* @.@ ok just update soon! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Animefreak11 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 19:53 CST
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hahahahhahaha kurama wearing that... ahahahaha i'd like to see!!!!!! hehehehee well i understand the overflow of hw thing, cuz i'm drowning as i speak!! i mean-- write... ^^U aaaaaaaaah! gotta finish stupid math, start french and studying for english, read bio and then... @.@ more studying!!!!! ^^ UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe...PMS were the initials for my middle school...hehe. ANYWHO, time for something completely different! I love the chapter and the story thus far. MORE! btw, I'm turning fifteen. I feel so old...T-T
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