Reviewed By: Mayatsu-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... very good story... This is actually the first time I've read a continuation-type GW fanfic where the pilots seem to speak (or the author writes of the pilot) from an adult, more grown-up perspective; your writing style achieved that (i.e. Wufei, flight, introspective)... What I like best, though, is the closeness that you put in between Heero and Sally in the first chapter, which I've never read in a fanfic before, but is absolutely correct in being there, because if you watch the series, then you see that Sally has that kind of true empathy for the pilots, and was shown to display care for Heero from the beginning in several incidents... Anyway, yeah. I'd say "can't wait for the next chapter", but I see that the last update for this fic was...*4* years ago??? ACK.
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