| "White Ribbons" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Moonpelt On: May 31, 2005 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I personaly love your story. I'm not going to give you any ideas though becasue if you take other peoples ideas then it won't be your story anymore. PLease update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sesshas Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 17:27 CDT
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^^ hehe... I be vixen! Me love that...^^ Showe...(so) Gonna go ahead with the tourney... ^^ mwahahaha.... mass mayhem and destruction...
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Reviewed By: Sesshas Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 17:37 CDT
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kewl! hehehe, Kitsune got sugar! Me want some! mwuahahaha.... We chibified hyper girls go on rampage... XD That would be funny. One piece of advice: it's too rushed! @_@ rushing is evil...
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Reviewed By: MeganRox On: April 01, 2005 14:06 CST
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this story rocks! please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: hi-chankurara [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 10:38 CST
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I can't log in pen name right, just to let you know. You story is great, it not suck. I wonderful I tell ya. Well I hope you do you best and good luck on your next story.
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Title: Cute...
Reviewed By: Salanti [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's all i can say cute! That's actually a clasic, a girl kissing a boy to get back at another. reminds me of Inuyasha...almost. but thats cuter, because in this story Hiei, Hiei isn't as stubborn as Inuyasha, that's a good thing! well gtg ja ne
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Reviewed By: Sesshas Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 19:09 CST
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but it made me...
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Reviewed By: Sesshas Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 19:09 CST
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You're evil, you know that? *huggles Kurama* but in a good way... ^^ Oh well!*super hugs you* THANK YOUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!! (I'm too lazy to log in)
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Reviewed By: Sesshas Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 17:28 CST
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WHO IS IT!?!? EEP! SNAP OUT OF THE COMA AND TELL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hieis_girlfriend120 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 17:12 CST
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yea!!! ^____^ this is sooo cool!!!! and boy hve i seen to many sluts in my life... one even tried to take my man away!!! *dignified look* but i took care of her! Yusuke: yah, by threatning to pore soda in her hair and dow nher shirt. you: hey it worked didn't it? Hiei: baka... You:shuda up!
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Reviewed By: Hieis_girlfriend120 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
maybe..... er...ideas?...........hm...... maybe hiei should have to.... end up.... for some odd reason... having to kiss her with everyone watching! ^_^ or maybe... *sad look* great... i'm not even the author of this and i've come to an auther block thingy.... and i need idea's for my own... I HOPE U UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sesshas Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 16:32 CST
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Awwwwww..... mushy! YAY!!! PLUSHIE!!!! *Huggles new Kurama plushie* *and gobbles cookie* Mmmmmm..... cookie..... sooooo.... Ida thought you had more than one internet friend. Or did you only put one? Ah, well, NOMB. Wow... Poor kitsune... Heh, At least I know I'm not the only one whose past life sucked. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Hieis_girlfriend120 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pppppppllllllleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update! ^________________^ i reeeeaaaalllly like it and would hate to wait. *sharpens random weapon* Kuwabara: how can you sharpen a ruber knife????? me: SSHHHHHH SHUT UP KUWABAKA!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hieis_girlfriend120 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 18:02 CST
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i love it!!!!!! you really need to update as soon as possible... but..... could you make the paragraphs smaller... i kept getting lost..... and my head started to hurt..... BUT I LOVED IT!!!!!! VERY ENTERTAINING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_________________^ ........yah......... peace out!!!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Sesshas Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 18:09 CST
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Cool. I'd have never thought you had a flair for the angst... Poor LK...DP: hn.Shut up gloomy.DP: *glare*So when's the next chap? Can't wait!
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