| "Science Class" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 20:31 CDT
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Well since you took the time to read and review one of my fictions I thought I would give you the same consideration. This piece of fiction was alright for the most part, though I might suggest putting up an OOC warning at the begining of the fic as what happened by the end was rather unexpected. Personally I could never see Kurama trying to get it on with Hiei in the middle of his science class. That was a tad too unrealistic for my tastes, especially after he had told Hiei that no one knew of them. I admire your efforts I really do, but you really could go back and fix a few things in here to mae it better. Please know that I am not saying this to be cruel, but I just know you are a likely a very capable person and don't like to see such great potential wasted.
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Title: pretty damn cool, but wtf?
Reviewed By: petersen On: September 24, 2005 13:43 CDT
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dudes, laurie, heather, that's pretty kinky shit. seriously, though, what was going through their heads? in fucking science class!? with Mr. webber? despite that, it was still a pretty cool fic. it would have been cooler if i had known who the people were. see ya in school.
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Reviewed By: dragonslibrarian On: September 23, 2005 08:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty funny. Usually I have constructive criticism, so here's something for you: The long spaces between each bit are annoying, and the story could flow a bit more smoothly. But otherwise, awesome fic! Good job!
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Title: LMAO!!!
Reviewed By: Kitsune-rosa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! I really enjoyed reading your fic! It was really funny, ESPECIALLY whe they got caught. And when his mom said that bit about her having her suspicians, that was funny too. You really are the comedian, and I can see you writing funny stories like this. I hope you do write some more of these funny in class escapades.
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Reviewed By: Schuldiger als Sunde On: April 14, 2005 20:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really OOC and needs work. Good try, though.
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Title: kool..heh Science class...at least Hiei doesn't die in this one..
Reviewed By: satoshi'sgrl On: March 10, 2005 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chick that gave the bad review should be shot..oo did I say that?..Well, I meant she should shut her slutty little mouth ..She was clearly an ameteur herself. I loved the fic..and as you may have seen earlier in the review..HIEI DOESN"T DIE!!!..It's is simply unheard of to kill Hiei..but some people(Laurie)..don't seem to see it that way..*mumbles to herself*..Oh ya anyways awesome fic..and knowing that I got to read it before it was posted makes me feel special...*sighs*.. Better see some more of these posted soon..
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: hi-chankurara [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 14:49 CST
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Love it. Love it. Love it. I love your story. It would be sooo cool to chat with you sometime perhap. I love it. 10 10 10 10. I don't really like rating other people story, because it would upset them and their story. Your story is very good. I love it, love it, and love. (I'm hyper today) sorry ~"."~
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Gir (Meg) On: January 19, 2005 19:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fic. Everything in it was great, kept you on the edge of your seat and the ending was just great! ^_^
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Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 15:27 CST
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the ending is funny............^_^
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