| "Betrayed" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 11:27 CST
Comment/Review:
I like your story and I would like it to stay yuyu hakusho and inuyasha. I hope you update soon.
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: raindropsRteardrops [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 19:46 CST
Comment/Review:
woohoo! yea for teh depressingness. i thought you were on my favorites list so i should of gotten a little "new story from author favorite, inkheart" or i''ve just gone crazy, and i think you know, i already have. ha. and of course being the diehard YYH fan i am.... i assume you can deduce my choice. (reading sherlock holmes makes you use nice words... coolio) and, my dear inkheart-chan, is this based on a personal expirence?
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Reviewed By: Fox Writer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 18:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Really good. Such a sad story. Keep on writing and update soon, please!
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Title: wow... *chapter 1*
Reviewed By: DG32173 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good job. i think it's very well illustrated. This must be Aurora's POV. well, i think it's excellent. not many people ever do an entire chapter or story in their character's POV. very well done! i think you should keep it with the Yu yu hakusho and inuyasha. i'm not a big fan of X-men. but it's still a good show. i got a few of the movies too. Well, whatever you decide, i'll stick with it. it's your fic, so don't give it over to your readers. unless you lose all hope of ever completing it. i do that sometimes, but i try to keep the story for as long as possible, until i finally give up on it completely. well, whatever you decide is good with me!! ja ne!
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Title: good job
Reviewed By: SesshomaruInuyashaKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 17:41 CST
Comment/Review:
it was an ok story. i liked it. i was wondering if i could be in the story? if not that's perfectly fine with me.
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