| "Lullaby" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: awww
Reviewed By: Miss Macabre : p On: January 13, 2006 04:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No, I love YOU.
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Reviewed By: red queen On: December 09, 2005 00:51 CST
Comment/Review:
awwww. this story's quite charming. i really liked the line about aya's guilt being a little lantern trying to fill up the night sky. kinda sad that it had to take yohji getting shot five times for them to tell each other 'i love you'. silly boys. i enjoyed this. -- love, RedQueen
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 09:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
(making no attempt not to sound like a raving fan girl): Kawaii!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 12:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this, thank you! Please do continue to write, and to ignore rundowns. Just because it isn't Hemingway (ick! wouldn't read that...) doesn't mean your writing isn't worthwhile! For instance, you just gave me a very enjoyable fifteen minutes, and that's gotta be worth something. Right?
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Reviewed By: gothria [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 22:49 CST
Comment/Review:
yeah i think i'll revise it. coz i know it's a little too rushed. thank you for the comment XD i'm such an attention whore =^^= oh and i will keep writing, even if people tell me not to! buwahahaha! eh...hehehe =^^= j/k really, thanks for the comment tho, it makes me feel like i'm not just writing crap, or as my friend calls it "trash reading" :)
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Reviewed By: Vampire Louis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 05:44 CST
Comment/Review:
*sniffles* Awwww how cute. I wish you would have done more with the story, fleshed it out a little but that's okay. It's really fine as is, I liked it anyway ^^! Keep up the writing, ne? X)
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