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| "Of Fire and Ice" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] | Title: Question:
Reviewed By: Magus Black [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 23:04 CST
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Lo, I have a few smal things to add (irronically I had missed them): For one: he wears simple tan pants like any other the villagers/peasants. (I had realized that a kimono is not alway...covering. Two: Since I have gotten no reply I'll ask now. Did you get it? I had emailed it to the address that you had placed but am unsure if you had actually gotten it. Well good luck, and if you use him...dont reveal 'everything' about him. (laughs at other reviewers) (cough) err Bye!
| Title: ^^ yet another character pt. 2
Reviewed By: Lonely_Destiny (not signed in) On: January 24, 2005 21:31 CST
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Crush/lover (If they have one): Sasuke or Naruto or Neji Question 1 basically not jumping in on the action, injured or not Question 2 someone to friendly and i don't mind if she is or is not in a relationship
| Title: ^^ yet another character pt. 1
Reviewed By: Lonely_Destiny )not signed in) On: January 24, 2005 21:30 CST
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Name: Kuroni Song Nickname (If your character has one): Kuro-kun Gender: female Age: 13 Hair colour/style: short dark blue hair that sprayed around her head messily and her bangs cover one eye Eye colour: emerald green Skin: darker than light brown,, lighter than dark brown Build: thin and swift Height: 5' 3" Weight: 105 pounds Village: Konoha Rank: Ninja - Gennin Weapons: kunais, chains, twin blades, shurikens Special techniques: has stealth beyond all the kages can fight with her eyes closed (or in the darkness) Preferred style of clothing: long pants, dark blue tank top under a long sleeved mesh shirt, leather gloves, ninja sandals Personality: boyish and hates being called a "chick", stubborn, and hard-headed but can be understanding and very friendly History: Kuroni came from a small family who died when she was one because of the Kyuubi, she trained herself very harshly and never settled for less than the best. Before (and during) the academy she would train from 7PM-5AM and sometimes 12PM-3PM too. Her training included shadowboxing, basic gen, tai, and nin jutsus, push-ups, pull ups, chakra manipulation, sit ups, etc. Friends or people he/she gets along with: Naruto, Kakashi, Neji, Sasuke, Shikamaru, TenTen, Rock, Iruka, Gai, Kurenai, Asuma, Chouji, Kiba, Hinata Dislikes/disliked by: Ino, Sakura, and other rabid fan people
| Title: whoops
Reviewed By: Lonely_Destiny (not signed in) On: January 24, 2005 20:37 CST
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didn't see these two questions: Question 1, Is there anything you object to you characters doing or not doing? Jukusei: she sort of believes to be Naruto's gaurdian so i would rather not have her be mean to him (other than any form of sarcasm) and Raven: i would rather not see him be harrassed or made deathly uncomfortable Question 2, If you character is put in a relationship with another character, are there any characters you object to them being with? Jukusei: No one really, i don't mind if she's in a relationship with a younger male and Raven: I actually don't mind who you put him with as long as it's not Ino or Sakura, male x male is fine with me Plus, would you like them to be in a relationship at all? Jukusei: I would rather have her in a relationship Raven: i really don't mind if you put him in a relationship or not
| Title: Another Character... this one is better then the second one
Reviewed By: thesoggywolf@yahoo.com On: January 24, 2005 11:25 CST
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Friends or people he/she gets along with: Royce, Naruto, Iruka, Hinata, Asuma, Ino, Sakura, Kiba, Chouji, Shikamaru (actually spends time helping her, she's his cousin-in-law... his older brother married her sister) Dislikes/disliked by: Neji (tired of her destiny .. blah blah blah) and other people Crush/lover (If they have one): Shikamaru
| Title: Another Character... this one is better then the second one
Reviewed By: thesoggywolf@yahoo.com On: January 24, 2005 11:25 CST
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She has leaned to read body movement and uses her seals to make sure people can hear her. History: Born in Konoha, was abused by her father, her mother died from injuries sustained a long time ago in battle with the kyuubi and Alize had become friends with the carrier and her father told her not too. Alize knows about the Kyuubi and hoped Naruto could help her fight her father. Shikamaru actually fought off her father when he was hanging out with his little cousin. She was 10 to his 14, and her helped her get to the hospital. She then moved in with her sister and went to the acadomy.
| Title: Another Character... this one is better then the second one
Reviewed By: thesoggywolf@yahoo.com On: January 24, 2005 11:24 CST
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Village: Konoha Rank: Ninja - genin Weapons: shurikens, kunais, Meteor hammer (long distance) Sabre, and a sling shot Special techniques: She can create plasma from her hands and use that to make illusions, or blind her opponent. If you get hit with it your kinda screwed. Good at hiding, spying, and codes. She's mute so she created signs where it sounds like words when she uses them, like ASL, but with seals. Preferred style of clothing: overzized navy blue t- shirt, dark green shorts, and blue samera socks and ninja sandles, wrist bands and arm/leg wraps Personality: She is a deaf and a mute, so her demeaner is calm, silent, and forgettable. She is smart, but no one wants to believe a defect like her could be strong. She is on a team with Konohamaru and Tiki (made up) and she is by far the "weakest". Bold, talented, and angry with the silence, she has developed techniques to give herself voice. She uses chakra on her skin to feel vibrations, like you and uses seals to form words. She became deaf after her father repeatedly banged her head against the table. She was born a mute. History: has lived in Konoha all her life, father in prisoned, mother dead. Sister is married and she lives with them. Because of this Alize is loyal, distrustful, emotionally bitter, and sweet. She is smart, observative, and refuses to be left behind. She will not let other put her down. She can hear, slightly, but only when she applies most of her chakra to her ears. She has leaned to read body move | Title: Another Character... this one is better then the second one
Reviewed By: thesoggywolf@yahoo.com On: January 24, 2005 11:21 CST
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Name: Alize, Tomoyo Nickname (If your character has one): Alize-chan, Bear, and Show-off Gender: female Age: 13 Hair colour/style: dead straight, black hair, chin length, with thick bangs. Her headband is worn under the bangs, pushing them up, and she has two random green frog clips worn on the right side of her head, clipped to her hair. She has cowlicks in the morning. Eye colour: brown (she''s asian) Skin: pale, brown Build: average build, flat chested, skinny but not curvy, stickish, has long legs, kinda ackward, small feet, small hands, and no butt. Height: 4' 9" Weight: 91 pounds
| Title: another character (hope you don't mind)
Reviewed By: Lonely_Destiny(not signed in) On: January 22, 2005 23:46 CST
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Name: Raven Hino Nickname (If your character has one): Rave Gender: Male Age: 15 Hair colour/style: black messy hair with dark purple highlights Eye colour: azure Skin: slightly tanned Build: small and petite Height: 4' 11" Weight: 91 pounds Village: Konoha Rank: Ninja - Chuunin Weapons: Fuuma Shurikens, shurikens, kunais, a sword Special techniques: none Preferred style of clothing: black metal plated gloves, plain white t-shirt, blach pants, ninja sandals Personality: almost never loses his cool, usually keeps to himself, protective of his friends History: has lived in Konoha all his life, no apparant family Friends or people he/she gets along with: Jukusei (my other char.), Kakashi, Naruto, Iruka, Neji, Tsunade, Hinata, Sasuke Dislikes/disliked by: Nearly everyone else Crush/lover (If they have one): likes Jukusei but then likes Hinata
| Title: my character pt. 2
Reviewed By: Lonely_Destiny(not signed in) On: January 22, 2005 22:51 CST
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and can very well be quite a bitch. though all of that she cares deeply about those close to her and will remain loyal til her demise. History: She came to Konoha as a child of 5 after running from a enemy of her clan. she was to come to Konoha to find her long lost sister, Tsunade. Friends or people he/she gets along with: Naruto, Neji, Hinata, Sasuke, Iruka, TenTen, Sakura, Tsunade, and Rock Lee Dislikes/disliked by: Kakashi, Ino, Kiba, Shikamaru Crush/lover (If they have one): Kakashi or Iruka if Kakashi is taken
| Title: my character pt. 1
Reviewed By: Lonely_Destiny(not signed in) On: January 22, 2005 22:51 CST
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Name: Jukusei "Treboru" Ookami Nickname (If your character has one): Treby by close friends and Treboru-sama/sempai/sensei by others Gender: female Age: 17 Hair colour/style: dark blue hair tied into a long braid reaching the back of her knees and has silver bangs Eye colour: her eyes are usually covered with the Konoha forehead protector, but her eyes come from her descendents which are a mixture of the byakugan and sharingan. Her eyes are white with the three sharingan swirls, which gives her the ability to see through solid things along with 360 degree sight, greater stamina and agility. it is called the "Diagan" Skin: olive pale Build: slim and swift Height: 5'0" Weight: 98 pounds Village: Originally came from the hidden mist village, but came to konoha when she was abused Rank: Ninja - Jounin Weapons: Double-bladed kunais, shurikens, kunais, handle-less kunai, throwing needles, a naginata, and a chain Special techniques: Ability to heal nearly as quick as Naruto, knows how to heal people, her Diagan, telepathic Preferred style of clothing: she always has bandages wrapped around her torso (much like tsunade), off-white/tan low cut V shirt, black/dark blue baggy pants, ninja sandals, Konoha forehead protector is always tied around her eyes unless she uses her Diagan in which she moves it to the side like Zabuza wore his Personality: stubborn and over-protective
| Reviewed By: Tim Seltzer On: January 21, 2005 12:55 CST
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I'd prefer if you didn't have my characters doing anything romantic...you can put them in comprimising/embarassing situations but that's it. They won't get into any relationship at all. By the way, if you need more male characters, I might be able to pop a few more on. Just say at the bottom of the fic if you need 'em.
| Title: To Answer Your Question Here
Reviewed By: Magus Black [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 09:19 CST
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Question #1- beyond kissing a guy on purpose. He most likely wont want to strip down in front of anyone (but that's his problem^-^). Question #2- As I said "whatever lady you have in mind" And to answer the last part of the second question. "That's up to you."
| Title: Another character for you
Reviewed By: thesoggywolf@yahoo.com On: January 21, 2005 00:36 CST
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History: Born into a poor family, was taken and experamented on. Still has nightmares. Accidently hurt his brother when he grew frightened. He ran, getting chased and accidently killed another innocent. He started knocking off bandits and storing their chakra in his feet, making him highly dangerous. He was a genin of snow and when he was caught by Konoha, he simply stayed and at 12 wanted to become a ninja. He was trained personally by Kakashi, a few years after team 7 began. Yo-Yo started training by himself and developed tricks. He is staying with Kakashi and has sometimes been called "Kakashi's slave" since he does all the cleaning. Friends or people he/she gets along with: Naruto, Shikamaru, Kakakshi, Hinata, and Sakura Dislikes/disliked by: Sand siblings, Gaara (not as much, he feels bad for him, but that is no excuse) Saske, Neji, Kiba, most other people Crush/lover (If they have one): Naruto and Hinata (Royce for a little while)
| Title: Another character for you
Reviewed By: thesoggywolf@yahoo.com On: January 21, 2005 00:36 CST
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Jointed Split: Causes your joints to stiffen so you cannot move. Suicide attack: Causes people to believe their teammates are their enemy and attack them. also good at ninjutsu, cannot fall fo illusions and can sense peoples aura. He is learning to control his feet. Uses a kick called: Aura Reduction to syphin off energy. Can take energy from trees or small animals. Sometimes can suck energy through the palms of his hands. Preferred style of clothing: black hat, arm and leg wraps (orange), a black teeshirt,black spandex pants and oranage shorts. Black sandles. Personality: unruley and scared of people. He is shy, but brash and acts like he is everything. He is a first rate genin, but refuses to be put in positions where he will kill again.believes in destiny, honor, and friendship. he also believes in hell, in which he is going. he tries to do good things. poetic, loyal and brave, he is still conqoring his demons. Insipid, cunning, and intellectual,good at spotting hidden things, emotions ect.
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