| "Drowning" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 16:12 CDT
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Nice, pretty orginal for a Ranma/TM cross over. In ways it makes sense, as I've been lead to believe by other peoples thoughts. The pools copy a person falling in first by species, then gender, then personalty and such. It takes multiple of the same race to get more specific, like how the animals dont' change the gender etc. So ranma becoming a male version of Ryoko's race isn't to far fetched since she was first and only one to hit the pools. Over all I think this story had a lot of promise, one the first where Genma is cursed as a side kick, and something worse then a panda. He gets off to easy most the time imo. Ranma being at least male is a nice break for the guy, considering he's catlike and Genma's cat like. Enough mental trouble for Ranma there without going over board and making him female to. Also seems you were hinting at the fact their curses were perment at the end the chapter.. too to funny. Hope you pick this fic up again some time.
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Title: Just Read
Reviewed By: Nysk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 05:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read this story and I have to say that I did not see Naru's problem coming. Was very very much a surprise. I look forward to reading more of this tale and hope it all does not come to a neat little happy ending anytime soon.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 08:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent start. I love your take on the Tenchi/Ranma universe. I hope you'll write more.
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Reviewed By: MutantMFM On: September 27, 2005 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story and it is very original compared to most Tenchi Muyo crossovers. The only thing I am disappointed on how short it is and how you marked it as completed when it does not feel like it has been. Please if you are still around continue this story I would love to see how Ranma handles his father now that he is a bottomless pit that can eat allot more than usual.
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Title: Ranma Male Version of Ryoko?
Reviewed By: Mattydeception On: January 20, 2005 11:58 CST
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Well, yeah. Surprised some one didn't poke fun at the fact Genma's a Ryo-oh-ki copy (sans gender). I mean, how many times has anyone actually seen Genma turned into the side kick/ass kicking space ship whenever something remotely similar happens?
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Reviewed By: GeKu On: January 19, 2005 17:04 CST
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so ranma has become a male ver of ryoko?
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