| "Harry Potter & The Hanyou Prince" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 12:47 CDT
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I was rolling when InuYasha buried the defeated Venus Flytrap plant. It's never boring with that rowdy dog-boy around! *wince* InuYasha's destructive ways on the Quiddich field...one can only hope he'll learn moderation so he won't accidentally kill someone during a game. LoL Now, a drunk InuYasha has endless amusment appeal. And I think you handled his feelings of melancholy and homesickness quite well. So often fanfic writers make InuYasha loud, rude and very crude. They conveniently forget that he has feelings, compassion and, contrary to popular belief, is quite intelligent. He's just an action person, and is prone to doing before thinking...very impulsive. I know he must be missing Kagome and his friends terribly. He never had friends before meeting Kikyou, and that relationship went so horribly wrong that I'm surprised he later allowed himself to care for Kagome at all...but she taught him what trust is and brought out his real self, wormed her way underneath his gruff defenses and saw him for who he truly was; not a lowly hanyou but a lonely person deserving of love. To have finally gained that only to be ripped away to a strange place to be some boy's bodyguard with the stipulation that he can't go back until Harry's life is no longer in jeapordy, I'm surprised InuYasha isn't more snappish and angry all the time. It just shows how smart he really is. He'll do the job...and wait. Oh, how he needs a good hug. Hehe, he's so cute when he blushes!
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Title: Harry Potter & The Hanyou Prince
Reviewed By: TaiRyuuYoukai On: May 20, 2005 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, love the story!! Very original, though to bad about not seeing Kagome in this one. At least she and InuYasha are paired up. And I agree with Hermione in chap one or two; SESSHOUMARU IS HOT! I am a die hard fan of him. Well, you will be on my author alert list so I will know when you update. I hope its soon!! My name is Aymia on this site but I am usually using the name TaiYoukai (ASSKS.org) or TaiOokamiYoukai (FF.Net) Well, best be going so you can get back to your magnificent writing!! Tai I also had to make up a name because MM.org wouldn't log me in.
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: Dark Heart On: May 18, 2005 00:31 CDT
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Yes, very much so. I'm enjoying this. Especially considering it's so realistic. You're keeping true to to the characters for the most part. Maybe a bit overboard with Snape being a jerk and Ron getting jealous, but who's to say that wouldn't really happen? Anyways, I'm really glad we have an Inuyasha crossover that doesn't involve Kagome running off and falling in love with someone new, usually after being betrayed by Inuyasha (which isn't really Inuyasha but a cheap out of character imitation just used as an excuse to turn Kagome into a Mary Sue since the author would get into trouble for making an original character go through that stuff). I'm loving this. I really am. Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: phalon22 (nsi) On: May 13, 2005 17:12 CDT
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Well Inuyasha is his guardian and I love the scene with him shattering those bludgers!!! That was funny. For some reason I think Harry is Inuyasha's reincarnation and there's many similiaries... Such as they both lost their parents and are pretty powerful in their own right. :) Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Annaku On: May 07, 2005 20:17 CDT
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AHHHHHHHHHH y haven't u updated yet Waaaaaaahhhhhhhh u must update i commaned u *down on nees begging * please updated *puppy dog eyes*
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Reviewed By: Carey Ann Lupin On: April 22, 2005 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have abosolutely write more to this fic. I loved it. I am a HP and Inuyasha nut so this was perfect. I can't wait to see what happens to malfoy and snape next...
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Title: IM SO SORRY
Reviewed By: Higurashi8 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 21:29 CST
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im so sorry i misstook this for a slasher fic and it is not this is a HARYY/HERMIONE and INU/KAG fic it was my mistake not the autors and im sorry for whatever confusion i may have caused! -higurashi8
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Reviewed By: InuMiko1 On: March 03, 2005 01:51 CST
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I really like this fic but one of your other reviewers said it's going to have slash (male/male) pairings. Is that so? If it is, please put a warning in. Some people (like me) really hate slash fanfiction. I hope you don't do it.
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Reviewed By: whirleeq(NSI) On: March 03, 2005 01:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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gods, I love this story... you absolutely rock! So... is kagome in the same time frame? if harry has inuyasha's soul, and inuyasha kicks it, wouldn't he be more likely to hook up with kagome than hermione? just a question -- you do what you want, but the hermione/harry thing... i dunno, i don't see it happening. She's on a totally different wavelength then he is. But Kagome/Harry has possibilities. Are we going to see sesshoumaru? Is your new DADA teacher sesshoumaru in disguise? (that's what I thought when you described him at first, but then he started talking...) did i tell you that I loved this story? Excellent job! I absolutely loved that scene in the potions room! Poor snapey probably wet himself LOL. Update soon!
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Title: OMG!!!
Reviewed By: Higurashi8 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 20:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! you are amazing!! i love harry potter anf inu yasha and i love slash fics! and youve got all three of them in a lovely little morsal!!! youve written this beautifully, and i know it must have been hard for you to come up with a slasher crossove like this! just know that you are an amazing writer! I really hope to get the next chapter soon, and i hope you finish to , i would be heart broken any other way! yours truly -Higurashi8
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Reviewed By: Dark Heart On: March 01, 2005 10:29 CST
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Ah, another fine chapter...I could so see Inuyasha getting into a fight with Snape...but adding a Draco dumb enough to get involved, heh. I'm glad you did make Harry an Animagus. This is going great! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Priestess On: February 25, 2005 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, you keep the characters characteristics up well. Its also a good story altogether.
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Reviewed By: phalon (not signed in) On: February 25, 2005 01:32 CST
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So Harry gonna turn into a big white dog as his animagus? Cuz that would be cool... Too bad it couldn't Inu No Taishio's size. :-D This was a great chapter, love the snake-biting bit and everything else... IT JUST ROCKS!
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Reviewed By: kaja1234(nli On: February 24, 2005 16:27 CST
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nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon please, this is a really good fic and i wanna see whats next!
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Reviewed By: Annaku On: February 24, 2005 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man this thing is hilarious. u gotta keep up dating. ja ne
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