| "Drabbles and Babbles and One-Shots, Oh My!" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Title: naraku's happily ever after
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel (nli) On: March 05, 2005 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD wow, what sadistic humor- i love it!! ah man, poor inuyasha.. but who wouldn't want to have Inu as a pet? lmao! that one was so good that i forgot which one i'd read before it..
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Title: hair of the dog, and his smile
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel (nli) On: March 04, 2005 23:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww.. =/ poor inu..that was touching and sad, but i wouldn't have thought they'd've let him stay that long. the one about sesshoumaru's smile made me smirk. i really liked the beginning- amazing describtions about the bone white and crimson blood, and then the pristine.. starshine... o.o or something like that. very nice detail.
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Title: whoa.
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel( nsi ) On: March 04, 2005 23:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ okay, so instead of reading possession for the millionth time over, i decided to check out these drabbles. the first one had me smiling,and the second one- just as you said, "whoa." very nice persipicacity.
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Title: forbiddden love, better safe than sorry
Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 17:48 CST
Comment/Review:
.....BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.....the cat! *sniggers* if I don't shut up soon I won't be able to come to the library anymore...*sniggers softly* better safe than sorry sounds kinda like a story my friend wrote for a journal he had to do for school...'cept the setting was the dentist's office...wait a few days and I'll post it so everyone can see...*continues to snigger*
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Title: Kyaaaa ha ha ha ha
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 15:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the frikin...*rolling on the libary floor laughing, coughing, chocking* I can't believe it, its too damn funny, there going to kick me out of the libary if I don't stop the laughter. I hope the other stories are updated soon. Ja matta ne...*mummbled obsinitys* stupid spam filter
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Reviewed By: ayjah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 13:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So funny :) Keep on adding !!! please !!!
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Reviewed By: Susanne [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 14:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Normally I'm not much into drabbles, but I really enjoyed "Naraku's Happy Ending" and "The Burden of Celebrity"! The Naraku story was just so cruel and so funny that I didn't know whether to laugh or cry. The Burden was plain hilarious - the lines, the whole situation and the final punchline. LOL! (but then I AM a sucker for Sesshoumaru)
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Title: Reflection
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 17:59 CST
Comment/Review:
This one drags a bit. We already know that Kanna's a nothing-demon and that her mirror can steal souls. It would be so much better if you cut straight to your own take on it.
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Title: Burden
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 17:56 CST
Comment/Review:
And a flip on the last line; that's the kind I like best.
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 17:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Myehehehehehehehehehehhee!! I love it when people get just what they ask for! ~~~ "Black-striped" is a hyphenated word, not two words. ~~~ I don't know whether this is funny or creepy. Oh yeah; it's both.
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Title: Hair
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooo... Killer first line, great body. The last line could be more momentous, but overall this one's a ten.
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 17:40 CST
Comment/Review:
"Interact" is a very modern-professional word. It sounds out of place here. Hmm... This drags a bit in the middle. We already know how Kikyo feels about her duty.
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Title: Drabbles and Babbles and One-Shots, Oh My!
Reviewed By: Kawaii_Kit On: February 18, 2005 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww~ OMG!! I've always loved Kanna... *you can ask my brothers who i've probably annoyed to the point of wanting to kill me, with my Inuyasha-ism* I loved your babble/drabble, whatever... lol, anyway it was amazing! I love all of them, especially this one and the one with Sesshy, and his "perfection" thing... They were great! Keep it coming!
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Reviewed By: ayjah [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 19:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Aww you don't think what Kanna really is - very nice interpretation :) I like the add in of the IY/Kags kiss
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Title: reflection
Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 19:32 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it....this could definetley become more than a one-shot if you wanted it to..*hint hint* anyways! great job! two thumbs up
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