| "Zoom Zoom" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, Awesome story! I loved it! And nice choice of rooms,The Library, Great Job!!!
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Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 16:52 CDT
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""I didn't mean to…ahh…intrude on your time but I was, like, all scared when I heard this thumping noise and I thought it was the librarian closing up the library so I rushed over here but I saw you and I got scared so I just followed you," Kagome took a deep breath and fell to the floor, crying." This paragraph, though seemingly pivitol, felt wrong. Why would she follow him if he scared her? Is she really so weak and messed up?? er, I'm sorry, I didn't really like this story. But don't stop writing, there seems to be other people who like it. ^_^;
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Title: KEEP EM COMING!
Reviewed By: SesshysMate On: April 30, 2005 09:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come up with more! That's torture leaving it like that! Make them do it again *is thinking* Umm.....ya...... The only thing I didn't like was that everyone was OOC
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Title: KEEP EM COMING!
Reviewed By: Sesshy'sGirl On: April 29, 2005 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come up with more! That's torture leaving it like that! Make them do it again *is thinking* Umm.....ya...... The only thing I didn't like was that everyone was OOC
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 11:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love it! more more more! pleaaaaaaaase!! it`s really good, keep up the good work =D
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 22:42 CST
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awsome story but is it over probably... you should write another one, not a sequal or anything i think that's be too hard, hard to top something like this. :D n e ways, great no awsome story thanx for the trip, Zirra
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Title: well good job
Reviewed By: AmonLover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 16:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a little to short for my taste but still good story keep writng
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Reviewed By: me_kikyou_104 On: February 15, 2005 17:50 CST
Comment/Review:
i like it write more please
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Reviewed By: asfasdf On: January 25, 2005 01:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ummm i konw where u sleep and if you dont write more then you'll be in deep shit.
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: kittencutie On: January 22, 2005 23:45 CST
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Oh My God this story is awsome!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!! i love the story!
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Reviewed By: gittelbug(when logged in) On: January 19, 2005 01:21 CST
Comment/Review:
cute story write more.
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: January 18, 2005 22:32 CST
Comment/Review:
well, i've looked at it and am wondering where the rest of it is.
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