"Sorairo" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Wow Reviewed By: musichika [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 23:18 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Lemme start off by saying that the only reason you don't get tens is because nothing is perfect... Okay, aside from that, I loved it! I'm a huge Thrill Pair fan. I love every aspect of the Pair, whether it be angst, fluff, drama, action.. whatever. So no, you didn't disappoint with the angst. In fact, there's so much Thrill Pair fluff floating around that I'm glad to see some angst. It was beautiful. If you didn't already post a second part to it, I suggest you do it. Any Thrill Pair fan should read this.
| Title: It's super interesting! Reviewed By: SR On: April 14, 2005 09:28 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hello! This is SR(which meaning is purely clear away, i guess. reading is SeRyu.) i'm Korean, so i'm really not good at English. but your story is exactly my style. well. actually, i'm writer, too. (of course, in Korea.) and this pattern is little common. but your story have mysterious fascination! I really love your story! and, just one thing. I don't know why you use Japanese in your story, seriously. You use English, and this is your language, and this is NOVEL. I think when someone write something, just use one language. of course, some word is just in Japanese, (like, senpai,) I konw that mind. well, just never mind. the most important thing is, I wait next one.(X^D)
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