| "Fine Tuning" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Kris10 On: February 02, 2005 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Just Wow. It's not something you see in many fics and you created the imagery masterfully. You sound like an expert on the practice and conveyed the emotions and physical feelings and reactions perfectly. Amazing. I hope the rest of your writing is of equal quality... Lemon or Non ::applauds::
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: January 25, 2005 00:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i must say that i have not read anything like that before..hmm what can i say about that but i have learned something new and that that was a really hot fic..there is noooo way i will find a more kinky and well use of toys in any other fic then urs...hehehe..well keeep the good work and hope that u have a good night day morning or whenever u read this..ja ne
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Reviewed By: reviewer01 On: January 20, 2005 19:06 CST
Comment/Review:
wat a crazy thing to do...sexy story tho
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Title: Oh. My. Goodness!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 13:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Does the term "squikily hot" make any sense? I really thought I'd heard of almost every kink, but this is a new one to me. Went and checked out a few sites. Those metal rods are BIG! They look more like lobster picks. Your descriptions were super hot but I suspect if I was a guy, I'd be hiding under the table with both hands over my groin right now! LOL!
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